|Reviews for Not Yet|
| cjunited38 chapter 14 . 7/24
loved it and embarrassed jane and maura are so cute lol
| cjunited38 chapter 12 . 7/24
you are not a story teaser adam lol
| cjunited38 chapter 11 . 7/24
shes doing it at her pace coz she already knows wat she wants
| cjunited38 chapter 10 . 7/24
oh ok cool and i like ur stories adam
| cjunited38 chapter 7 . 7/24
wat is there not to love
| cjunited38 chapter 6 . 7/24
the fizzy wuzzies huh lol
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/17
I'm aware you wrote this years ago. This isn't my first read. But I felt it my responsibility to comment this time. Your works are very enjoyable with enough reality and fantasy to make them so much fun to read
| Jaxom Catt chapter 7 . 2/3
I love this chapter but it took me a while to settle into it because it directly conflicted with the information about Jane from the top of Chapter 2, that the only people she's ever been attracted to were men and being attracted to Maura made her feel like she didn't know herself. Then in this chapter she says she's always been attracted to women and never men. ?!
So I had to change my view of Jane's character based on a completely opposite history all of a sudden.
| malexfaith chapter 14 . 2/1
SO i do realise I'm a bit behind on the times...like 6 years behind, but your writing is so awesome I had to go back and read it. Love this, so glad it wasn't a one shot. Thanks heaps for sharing
| Joan chapter 14 . 1/8
Brilliant slow burn. Well written too.
| Terri411 chapter 14 . 6/18/2015
I have read this fanfiction from chapter 1-14,and I have to say I love it _..
I love how you went slow with Jane getting to found herself out,and dealing with
it in a good manner..
I also like how Angela helped Jane out by accepting her lifestyle to love another woman,and how
awesome is daddy Frank,I'm so happy that you wrote he accepting Jane,loving Maura..
Others always write him hating it and leaving Angela cause she don't mind it at all,
(HATS OFF TO YOU) I love it..
Their first time together was awesome,I so love the way you wrote the scene,but I would had loved to read a little more detail into their loving making..
I just to read them together that way,it's awesome to me and the fact that the show don't let them
partake in a relationship together,you can always count on fanfiction to fill that gap..
Amazing chapters,I love what you did with the writing,BRILLIANT,so loved this story and so
looking forward to the sequel Not Now,just to see how all this played out lol..
Thank you and HAPPY WRITING ! :-))))))))))))) ,xoxoxo
| Terri411 chapter 7 . 6/16/2015
I think I'm in love with your story as well AdmHawthorne,of all 7 chapter chapter I have
read so far,to me this is the best,love the relationship of mother and daughter in your fanfiction..
And I also love that fact that Maura is Jane's first girlfriend how awesome is that,I can't wait to
read on to see what you have next..
Amazing chapter,lovely writing,so loving this story,and so looking forward to reading more of it thank you and HAPPY WRITING ! :-)))))))))))) xoxox
On to the next awesome loving chapter...
| wolvesjr34 chapter 14 . 6/8/2015
if reviews are like crack... you must be overdosing from all the reviews I have left you the last couple days ha ha
Another brilliant story.
| Dragonling743 chapter 14 . 8/26/2014
Okay, this was fun. Definitely a good way to get my toes in the ship before I dive in.
| Dragonling743 chapter 12 . 8/26/2014
okay, gotta love Maura, she's like an angry kitten when she's jealous. That is so adorable.