|Reviews for A Curious Nature|
| greenwings33 chapter 10 . 3/12
I love this. It is amazing and I demand more chapters!
| arabellalynn chapter 10 . 3/12
| Azaleas chapter 10 . 1/28
| Valentina Alexandrea Sparrow chapter 10 . 1/27
Love ittt sooo much
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/28/2013
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| angelalexiel16 chapter 10 . 11/5/2013
please update this is a very good story and I would hate to see it not finished.
| Nicci-Sama chapter 10 . 9/9/2013
Soooo... Two Years, huh? Coming back at all?
Anywho! I like the story in general. You need a beta because while I know what you're trying to say, it's usually not what you actually write. I'm a bit confused on where the story is going. I see that they're getting away from England, finding themselves, and moving on to find love and all that, but there doesn't appear to be any kind of conflict or plot beyond the guys finding their mates. At first I thought you were going to bring back Greyback, but Remus already killed him. So where is this going? Is it going to lead into the Twilight series somehow? Or is it just about them all finding love?
That said I just have a couple of comments. These thoughts stuck with me from the beginning.
- First: If Hermione's spell removes the false memories from her parents, wouldn't they retain all the memories they gained in Australia after the false ones. Those memories weren't implanted. So why would the spell erase them?
- Second: The beginning is a bit slow. I found it hard to continue reading. It might have to do with the sudden flashbacks that pop up (sometimes from someone else's point of view). These flashbacks, while informative, tend to break the flow of the story.
- Third: Theo fed Crookshanks a sock. Sure he transfigured it, but it was a sock. Why not transfigure it into a toy or something? What about the other sock? He's going to have a random sock floating in his laundry now. I just find it odd that he fed a cat a transfigured sock as a treat.
- Fourth: It's been a few weeks and Ron hasn't heard from his family at all. Shouldn't he be getting a letter or five? Wouldn't Ginny want to keep him up-to-date as the family peacekeeper? Maybe a harassing one from the others?
I hope this doesn't discourage you from writing. I try to make my reviews constructive. I like this story and hope to see more soon. However, I just found it and it's been over a year since update so I won't get my hopes too high.
Thank you for your hard work. Keep it up. Don't let life stop the story.
| Keena3105 chapter 10 . 8/14/2013
Have you abandoned this story? I love it! Its a twist on the normal crossovers :) update again soon!
| ForbbidenForest chapter 10 . 7/25/2013
PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN, I KNOW IT'S BEEN A LONG WHILE BUT PLEASE!
| Yaoi jutsu chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
very nice, your has a nice flow to it.
| AkitaSagaraAlanya chapter 10 . 7/6/2013
Awesome! Keep going please!
| Kai19 chapter 10 . 6/29/2013
*cries* why, why isn't there more of this?
I know, not much point in asking, but I have to hope that eventually you might update. I really like this story so far!
| James chapter 10 . 6/22/2013
Is this going to be updated at all? Ever? Please?
| ChiffonShock chapter 10 . 6/5/2013
Can't wait to read more of this! :-D
| jupimako chapter 10 . 6/3/2013
I hope you decide to continue this in the future. I'd love to read more.