|Reviews for One Time|
| Dee474 chapter 1 . 4/27
| autumnrose2010 chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
I hope that he is providing financial support for the child...
| Mary Catherine Marshall chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
"Marion would see to that." Ah, ditzy Marion, happy at last. Great story!
| Avery1 chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
How sad. You really captured the inherent loneliness of an agent's life. The reader can feel the sacrifices made. I loved the reaction as he "was confronted with eyes so much like his own." Beautiful touch.
| RoseLight chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Heartbreaking. Again, you create an entire story from a sliver of a the finality in that last telling line...(sob)
| emeraldarrows chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
A very sad but beautiful little scene. Nicely done as usual.:)