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Guest chapter 1 . 4/29
oh thank goodness you brought him home safely.
beautiful short story.
carrotmusic chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Great suspense. So glad for the HEA. Thanks for sharing.
BearcatsRock chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
Aww! Way to make me cry on a Friday afternoon. Great job!
jkh1 chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
great, love, hope he is real
Vulcan Rider chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Beautiful. Just beautiful.
Maggie
MissPadfoot101 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
OMG I love it. This is really good. Great job! I hope he's real.
Margaretlucylu chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
omg

this soooooooooo needs a continuation, cant tell you the number of tears i am wiping off my face
Dikent chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Great job! Love it. Him holding her and telling her back that he loved her tooo, sweet.. More?
batman40 chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
That was phenomenal! Beautifully crafted. Excellent emotion.
forever babe chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
I love this! Please continue.
time4tea chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
I could feel the pain and anguish in this story and was so relieved to read the final line.
RachDvn chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
I just love how the ending is ambiguous, left to reader interpretation. Beautiful one shot. Rach
Emelie Martel chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
Ok , I'm sitting on a bus with 50 other people trying to hide my tears and sobs any my nose is running. It's really very embarassing.

Beautifully done. I'm hoping there will be more.
BabeCakeLvr chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
Loved it! Will you be continuing it?
imtooldforthis chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
this was great, very poignant. Are you planning on more chapters or is this a one-shot?
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