Reviews for Hostage
johnny salgado chapter 3 . 1/18/2011
how hostage drama done
Cat y Mini chapter 3 . 10/18/2010
Hey :)

Nice chapter yeah D i'm curious to see what shall happen next...

PS.. I hate the nurse.. she makes me think about a stereotype bitch :3 I hope she will die

Kisu and cya next chapter :3
Mew Phong chapter 3 . 10/18/2010
Dududuuuuuuh! Wonder what's happening next?
Resha Tsubaki chapter 2 . 10/2/2010
It's good for a first fic. Update soon, I'd like to know more.
Cat y Mini chapter 2 . 10/1/2010
I like the story.. the plot is interesting, then i think i 'll follow it )

a little thing, your paragraphes structure seems a little bit confusing, aboce all when there is the dialogues.. and maybe the ponctuation too..

BUT i like it. for a first try, it's very good and I wish you will continue writing 3


(sorry if the english is not so good.. because i'm not english... )
Mew Phong chapter 2 . 10/1/2010
I'm glad that you didn't just have her kiddnapped, that would be really occ. I like the way this is going so far. Update soon?