Reviews for C'est la Vie |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow how did that story only get 17 reviews? That story was amazing and im glad to have read it~ it was a beautiful ending (w. a nice lemon) smh:) Sammy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the details and the heartbreaking beginning of the story but the ending was anti-climatic. I would so love a continuation these French characters to see you proving my review wrong. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nicely done... I loved the way he "courted her" with the different flowers... beautifully done, I hope they got away and lived HEA in the Americas ... no guillotine for those two! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story please let me know if you plan to expand it. Sorry I missed the contest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mon ami, that was absoutely fantastic! I was enthralled from beginning to end.. Such detail, such accurate telling.. It was positively magical and transcending. Merci for writing...:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful attention to detail. What did Edouard inscribe in the book? Beautifully told |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story. The way you structured it, with the POV shift, worked really well. Thanks for writing and sharing your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! I'm so happy I had a chance to read your story! I know you did a ton of research for it, and it showed. So good, though I was thinking "Nooooo!" the whole time Edward was with Lauren. The level of detail you put in was fantastic, and of course I wish you luck in the contest! :-) xoxo Sarah |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was pretty good! Thank you :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i wish there was ore i loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Thanks so much for sharing it with the rest of us and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so great! I could visualise the scenery, the clothing, the atmosphere. Good luck! Luv BBxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this :) You have done a great job. I love the way you have nailed the tone; very convincing! One tiny is for me as a French speaker is that Isbelle would be 'ma chère' and 'mon amie' (feminine). Congratulations on an excellent submission and really good luck! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story. I would love to see it continued...how they escape Versailles and what their life is like afterward, etc. I really enjoy this period of history, and I'm glad you represented it so well. |