Reviews for Storm
wotumba1 chapter 2 . 3/30/2018
good :)
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 3/30/2018
poor Don!
sparra-music chapter 2 . 6/8/2017
Is this meant to be marked complete? I'd really like to see Don solve this case...
anonymous chapter 2 . 12/18/2011
Lightning after thunder is physically impossible. The speed of light in a vacuum is 300,000,000 meters per second, and the speed of sound through air is only ~340 meters per second. I found all those errors in the story where the thunder came before the lightning very distracting, almost distracting to the point where I wasn't able to recognize how good this story is (and it is!). Keep that in mind next time.
Cinnamon Selkie chapter 2 . 10/16/2010
Beautifully written and evocative. Lovely to see Do with someone to look after him after a tough day-or night. Cinnamon.
same ol' Tgirl chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
What a great read! You have such an elegant way of expressing the relationship between Don and Robin...I look forward to more!
Ms.GrahamCracker chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
A follow up piece showing more of the actual case would be awesome, but, why on earth would you take him out of the bedroom or put his shirt on? Why fix something that isn't broken? I like him and Robin just the way they are here. This was perfect. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
HuskerCat chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
"That was before. When you were alone. You're not now."

So simple, so elegant and so true. It is at the heart the issue underlying the difficulties that he had (has?) with all of his relationships; the ability to understand that he doesn't have to do it alone, that the people who really care about him will be there for him, no matter what. And you captured that thought so clearly and so beautifully.

And I loved your idea of his secret, that being together helps him let go and that he was willing and able to say it out loud to her. A lovely sentiment and so befitting of that tender core he so strongly protects and that Robin so wonderfully understands. It's why I've always liked her for him as opposed to the multitude of other women he's had in his life.

Great job and I hope to read more from you. Maybe that follow-up piece about the case... So much angst...
Ms.GrahamCracker chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
First, I totally understand missing Rinne's daily dose of damaging Don, but, whatever the reason, I'm just glad you wrote another story. I have always loved the way you write Don and Robin and this one was no exception. Waiting for a loved one during a storm is a very emotional experience and you really nailed Robin's feelings.

I loved the way Robin and Don interacted when he came home. She's really settled him, hasn't she?

This was great and I can't wait to read chapter two.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
i totaly love your stories
Jess chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
This was lovely. I just loved Don's "secret"...
Rinne chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
Beautiful and gorgeous and *happy sigh*.

Really hope that you continue writing...
Synbou chapter 2 . 10/3/2010
With love, empathy and a dash of humour, one can get through the worst of storms.

Thank you for sharing.

Isa
Synbou chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
That was EXCELLENT!

looking forward to more
HuskerCat chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
Wow. This is quite the read with a great story and some absolutely wonderful lines. "On the other hand, if some macho, alpha-boy federal agent wanted to show up and rescue her...she might be able to learn to live with it." Couldn't we all...

And I love the idea that she told him that he could tell her what happened and she'd still be there. It always seems to be such an issue for him, being left if he shares what he sees and experiences every day. He really did find the right woman in Robin.

I hope we won't have to wait long for part 2!

Great job!
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