|Reviews for Unintended Consequences|
| raven haired girl chapter 25 . 7/20
amazing story I loved it !
| Guest chapter 25 . 6/30
I like how you have Harry not trusting Hermione after the battle that's how it should have been in the books, that's one of two things I think JK Rowlings got wrong having Harry trust Hermione to much and not having Ginny in the books more.
| Epeefencer chapter 16 . 6/27
Polyjuice doesn't work the way you portray. Remember that Barty Crouch Jr had to keep Mad-Eye captive to have fresh hair to use. It seems that it needs to be freshly cut to work.
| lschierer chapter 20 . 6/18
The amount of fuss over parental consent strikes me as odd when Scotland is well known for marriage at 16. While there does seem to be a nominal residency requirement now, it still looks like something Harry and Ginny could have easily obtained in the muggle world. I guess the thought is that a muggle marriage would not help with the Trace?
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/3
you are absolutely sick in the head. what the fuck is this about piercings and tattoos? story had been diverting into degeneracy since chapter 1, but this is something else
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/29
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/29
| Wren Truesong chapter 25 . 4/21
Still one of my greatest favorites.
| Guest chapter 25 . 4/16
You can tell the author is a piece of shit. Go fuck yourself, your cunt mother regrets not aborting you,.
| Queen Hady chapter 2 . 2/14
| Queen Hady chapter 1 . 2/14
| SarahOlivier chapter 25 . 1/31
I don't see Ron and Hermione together
| Billy Cook chapter 15 . 1/19
Stop the studering ease its annoying
| PotterFanatic17 chapter 25 . 12/15/2020
This was such a great story! I loved how you solved all the Horcruxes and so much quicker. It was great to see Harry and Ginny together and tackling the world.
| Hadami chapter 25 . 10/12/2020
I really liked this fic. Ron and Hermione were definitely ooc, but I don't think they would both leave Harry unless they were. Harry and Ginny being so in love was also a little weird.
I can forgive all that stuff for how good the rest of the story was. There are a good amount of DH Hinny fics, and this might be the best I've seen. Thanks.