god you made naruto such a cringy fuckin loser,but...WHY?

This is the 3rd Naruto fic I've read this week where Sakura threw up on someone. All from different authors too, this is getting to be a pretty weird coincidence

Yeah, I still wish this didnt make a 90 degree turn off into the authors demon land. I basically started reading this just to see how hinata and naruto would do in the authors vision if she womaned up at the start of shippuuden, but now that Ive made it to the end of the currently posted chapters, I cant say I intend to keep following this.

On the other hand, this is well written overall, with nice characterizations for those who arent put off by the plot direction.

Im pretty sure the kyuubi could take on all 3 and win. He would just need to escape naruto first and use his full power. These shits dont strike me as more challenging than the paths of pain.

Though I do admit I think the characterization of the demons has been done well, I do also think the focus of the story shifting into revenge for a perceived slight is a bad arc. This feels like a naruto movie, in that I dont really care what is going on in regards to the story atm. Im just hoping its done with and we can get back to our regularly scheduled shinobi stuff.

The story has done a good job of showing both how entitled these demons are, and how much they bristle, like a small dog that yaps because it knows it has no bite compared to the other dogs (demons in this case). They are not strictly evil, they just have different priorities to our protagonists, mostly in that they dont care for human niceties when it comes to their own ego.

Good chapter

Wait... I have a bad feeling Rimona was in love with Asura or some bullshit and now wants to steal Naruto from Hinata. Where the fuck else would Rimona be, and why else would some random girl be written going to Konoha?

Ok, first of all I am either slow on the uptake or pretty on target with these predictions Ive had. Secondly, really?

If there were any more ominous foreshadowing in this fic, Naras would rule the world.

Let me guess. The Hyuuga will be too stuck up to ask for assistance from the village.
Yep, called it.

So, this little honeymoon Naruto and Hinata are having doesnt seem to be focusing on the main purpose of it. You know, fucking like rabbits? Seriously, author, its like youve dumbed everyone down for this arc. Theyre literally wandering the countryside and treating this like a vacation.

You telling me it hasnt rained at all? Geez.

Them leaving the village randomly makes zero fucking sense. This is one of the first times the author has been nutty here. What Tsunade suggested is to get Lilith out as soon as possible. Well, there is one way to do that. And Aru tracked them down to the Leaf village inside a month. Whereever they would hide, it would need serious distance or protection. Somewhere like Mt Myoboku. Not skipping town for a honeymoon. If you cant hide, the best thing is to just let them fuck like rabbits while in town and give them a protection detail, with reinforcements being nearby. If the current direction doesnt turn out to be a mistake, I will eat my hat.

Itll do Neji good to actually have a romantic relationship with Tenten. She is a catch, even if she isnt the strongest kunoichi ever. She is dedicated and caring.

I like this story
Could you please let us know when there will be an update

ah whores r us trash no thanks

succubus? so its definitely retarded and i shouldnt waste time on it