Reviews for He Will Be Mine
Hazard1122 chapter 42 . 9/13/2019
Absolutely love this story. Love your version of Hinata. Bold, outspoken, and courageous Hinata is the best!
Wolvmbm chapter 42 . 9/9/2019
Great emotional update and the overall way that Naruto kept his anger in check was impressive. Still even after learning something that difficult it’s understandable that he breaks down after learning the truth of his clan legacy. It’s nice that Hinata is by his side after an emotional moment like that.

Please keep up the good work on this fantastic tale of yours.
Yuri chapter 42 . 9/4/2019
Emotions spot on! The atmosphere was everything.
Sable Dawn chapter 28 . 9/6/2019
Have to wonder why Naruto and Hinata do not go hide on Mount Myoboku, seems like a nice place cept for the food.
Tiara13 chapter 4 . 9/5/2019
oh, sh*t its a neji
Pete chapter 42 . 9/3/2019
UPDATE SHATTERED MIRROR pls
Guest chapter 42 . 9/3/2019
UPDATE SHATTERED MIRROR
cathyscloud9 chapter 42 . 9/3/2019
Great chapter!
Striker - Master Of Hearts chapter 42 . 9/3/2019
Came for the smut. Stayed for the feels.
ila123 chapter 42 . 9/2/2019
Thanks for the great update author-san.
Looking forward for the next chapter!
Danny Williams chapter 42 . 8/30/2019
Had a lot of chapters to go thru to get this far (I found them to be veryentertaining).
they had action suspense cliff hangers and romance]
Well written with very few misspells (was still able to understand.
Cannot wait until Naruto/Hinata start to collect what the people owe them)
Guest chapter 42 . 8/30/2019
i would hope tsunade would have the good sense to remove those two from power after this.
jerniman chapter 42 . 9/1/2019
Great to see an update. This is such a great story.
Axccel chapter 42 . 8/30/2019
Nonononono Inoichi. Do NOT call repaying him what you owe him a “wedding present.” Geez that would be one of the most asshole moves in this fic. The village, not the clans, owe Naruto since it was the village which was rebuilt. Any clans who were directly aided with his wealth should also pay up.

There is no Namikaze clan, Minato named himself that. No idea why every single writer thinks he’s from a clan. He married into the Uzumaki clan. If he were from a clan, it still wouldn’t have been as prestigious as the Uzumaki so he still would have married into it. They founded and ruled both a village and a nation, after all.
W8W chapter 42 . 8/30/2019
Very nice chapter. I hope that Naruto will learn some of his clan tricks. What I learned that Uzumaki were experts at seals I was really hoping that he will continue this tradition unfortunately it never come. Events were exciting and believable.
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