Reviews for He Will Be Mine |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely love this story. Love your version of Hinata. Bold, outspoken, and courageous Hinata is the best! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great emotional update and the overall way that Naruto kept his anger in check was impressive. Still even after learning something that difficult it’s understandable that he breaks down after learning the truth of his clan legacy. It’s nice that Hinata is by his side after an emotional moment like that. Please keep up the good work on this fantastic tale of yours. |
![]() ![]() Emotions spot on! The atmosphere was everything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have to wonder why Naruto and Hinata do not go hide on Mount Myoboku, seems like a nice place cept for the food. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, sh*t its a neji |
![]() ![]() UPDATE SHATTERED MIRROR pls |
![]() ![]() UPDATE SHATTERED MIRROR |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Came for the smut. Stayed for the feels. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the great update author-san. Looking forward for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() Had a lot of chapters to go thru to get this far (I found them to be veryentertaining). they had action suspense cliff hangers and romance] Well written with very few misspells (was still able to understand. Cannot wait until Naruto/Hinata start to collect what the people owe them) |
![]() ![]() i would hope tsunade would have the good sense to remove those two from power after this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great to see an update. This is such a great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nonononono Inoichi. Do NOT call repaying him what you owe him a “wedding present.” Geez that would be one of the most asshole moves in this fic. The village, not the clans, owe Naruto since it was the village which was rebuilt. Any clans who were directly aided with his wealth should also pay up. There is no Namikaze clan, Minato named himself that. No idea why every single writer thinks he’s from a clan. He married into the Uzumaki clan. If he were from a clan, it still wouldn’t have been as prestigious as the Uzumaki so he still would have married into it. They founded and ruled both a village and a nation, after all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice chapter. I hope that Naruto will learn some of his clan tricks. What I learned that Uzumaki were experts at seals I was really hoping that he will continue this tradition unfortunately it never come. Events were exciting and believable. |