|Reviews for Aku Blues|
| Lady Fiona of Vampire Manor chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Cute OMG I LOVED it so much I think it was so good PLEASE PLEASE make sure more I think that you are a wonderful writer
| Dr. Angryslacks chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Well, I can tell it's not ripped off of a Dragon Ball Z movie for a change. However when you illustrate something you make pictures which is not really helpful when the page is all text. Also your friend could have put more effort into this. The story could have been stretched out into at least ten chapters, but instead one miniute Ian and Blossom are on a hill the next Ian is in a cave with his party fighting Aku.
What happend in those two hours? Did the party fight Aku's minions? Or stumble upon something useful? We don't know, you have to tell us. At least your spelling and grammar has redeeming value though.
By the way do you really read these reviews? or do they just clutter up your inbox?
-Dr. Angryslacks of Critics United.