|Reviews for No bad words allowed|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2016
Oh my gawd
Luffys innocence! Thats why you dont leave little siblings alone in a place ment for adults!
It was pretty funny though
| soc60cor chapter 1 . 3/19/2016
that's it. u have me COMPLETLY hooked onto your stories! \ _ / his innocence is just too cute!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/13/2016
Oh gosh! I don't even know how how to react! When I read this, I squealed so much that I seriously hope that I didn't disturb my neighbors! Great story though!
| Superwhomerlockianbookworm chapter 1 . 2/4/2016
OMFG THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL IF YOU'RE UP FOR IT, PLEASE MAKE A SECOND OR THIRD CHAPTER LIKE ONE WHEN HE'S OLDER WITH ACE OR WITH THE CREW OMG THAT WOULD BE SO FUNNY
| EnixFairy chapter 1 . 12/22/2015
OMG THAT WAS TO FUNNY...or mabey im easily amused...OH WELL YOU DID GREAT
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2015
Poor Ace... XD
| xxXxx chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
| sisimiura chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
:D :D :D :D :D :D i really wanted to see that in anime :D :D :d
| kickassdani chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
oh dear oh dear oh dear
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
#burst out laugh
DADAN HEARD IT!
Ace was definitely a pervert!
When Luffy said that for the first time, what he think was beyond what normal kid would think!
Oh Luffy... Still so innocent...
| Wolf and MR Lover chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
This is wrong on so many levels yet so funny!
| LostFairyMantic chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
Hahhah! Oh god, my stomach! XD this is brilliant! Absolutely beautiful! XD
| ayushi chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Ohgod hahhahahhhahhaaaa I just fell off the bed laughing XD Amazingly funny XD
| Paws13 chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
i can't breathe. I'm laughing way too hard. INSTANT FAVORITE