Reviews for Life Begins A New
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
hi review maniac Joy it is so good same day but i hope you keep exceding through barriers unknown and i am proud and i am posting this on my 3ds and here is my e-mail if i can help with any other fanfics but ist actually my moms but here
Guest chapter 7 . 9/15/2013
office sex...
christonni chapter 4 . 9/15/2013
how cute! ...but really jaken against sesshomaru that will see that happened .
thelastunicorn chapter 14 . 3/16/2013
i love this story. it is really good and a little funny. i can't wait for the next chapters to come out soon. _
sess loves kag chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
hurry up on the next chapters
sess love kag chapter 14 . 2/21/2013
dog general returning and kagome is in rage what the enemy will do to sess
sess love chapter 14 . 1/27/2013
and also inutaisho returns to help is son these are my ideas
sess love chapter 14 . 1/27/2013
kagome take the children to the hide out but then she goes back to help sesshomaru leaving the children at the hide out
leaving the children with songo
DAfan chapter 14 . 12/30/2012
It's been over a year can't you add one chapter so we know what happens!?
T Daniel chapter 14 . 12/22/2011
i loved Unexpected Transformations...and so far like this storey but please do not kill kag or sess or thier children off it would ruin the storey...but i think kag should become stronger instead of sick her babies give cause new powers to appear due to the strength of both parents...kag is a miko/demon remember and also the true keeper and guardian of the shikonotama...in essence she is the strongest miko ever being that she is THE SHIKON MIKO WITH OR WITHOUT THE TAMA SHE IS MORE POWERFUL THAN ANY MIKO ...EVER...AND ALSO A DEMON...AND AFTER MATING WITH SESS...SHE WOULD NATURALLY BECOME STRONGER THEY BOTH SHOULD BECOME MORE POWERFUL AFTER THE SHE COULD BE CARRYING POWERFUL MIKO/DEMON PUPS...THE PUPS COULD EVEN HAVE POWERS LIKE ELEMENTAL ABILITIES LIKE...CONJURE AND CONTROL ALL ELEMENTS SUCH AS WATER,FIRE,EARTH AND WIND...MIKOS CAN ALSO SEE THE FUTURE LIKE A SEER...THEY CAN ALSO READ AND CONTROL MINDS OF PEOPLE AND CAN ALSO COME TO LIVE AT THE CASTLE NOW HIS DAD IS BACK AND HE CAN MEET AND FALL IN LOVE WITH AND MATE A DEMONESS...MAYBE ONE OF THE ONES KAGOME INVITES TO THE CASTLE TO MEET OF KAGOMES NEW ABILITIES CAN BE TO CHANGE BEINGS INTO DEMONS WITH OUT USING MUCH POWER SO SHE CAN MAKE RIN AND MAYBE EVEN MIROKU/SANGO AND KIDS DEMONS AS WELL SO THEY CAN LIVE AS LONG AS SHE . AND TO USE HER MIKO POWERS DO NOT HARM HER PUPS BECAUSE THEY TOO ARE MIKODEMON AND PRIEST/DEMON SHE IS CARRYING ONE GIRL AND ONE BOY PUP...PLEASE ! PLEASE ! PLEASE !UPDATE SOOOOOON ! ILL BE WATCHING 4 AN UPDATE...THANX...
xxoikilluoxx chapter 14 . 12/18/2011
i have an idea how about u do the next chapter of Inutashio and Inuyasha's encouter
Knewknowledge chapter 13 . 11/14/2011
You seem to like having Sesshoumaru mouth Kagome's breasts in your Lemon scenes. I propose giving a minor change since its nearing her last term of pregnancy soon, by having her lactate into his mouth with him reacting in shock some way or another.
trissinata chapter 14 . 11/2/2011
hmm, sesh and aro meet outside. fight. day saved by inuyasha? and then father shows up. problems are worked out.
Teresa Daniel chapter 14 . 11/2/2011
Hi, I like your life begins a new story so far and would like to help give you some possible ideas to take into could have Inuyasha,Sesshomaru,Inutaisho,invite everyone they know to join the battle to defend all the lands against Naraku,his minions and this Aro guy and can invite all the hanyous he knows which will be more demons than anyone could possibly and allies from his past that he help along the will bring all his friends,allies and will bring in all his old allies,friends and,they will bring all their friends, allies and families to help because all demons will know this is the fight for their freedom and should the bad guys win they will loose everything they ever had including their freedom and their lives as well as anything they have from land to money to homes, and Kaede will call in all Mikos and Priestesses,to come and bring all they need to do will call in all monks and priests to come and bring all they can and will need to do battle such as lots of sutras and paper to make will call in all slayers from other slayer tribes they all knew and were loyal to her family who were head of all the demon slayer tribes which would make Songo like the "Slayer Queen".Kagome, Miroku,Inuyasha,Sess,Inutaisho and Kaede all know some sorcerers(males),sorceresses(females),necromancers,mages,witches elves,fairies,water imps,who will calls in all the and his bunch wont stand a will bring all the wolf tribes in along with Ayame and her tribes and all their all want to make sure they get rid of all the bad guys once and for all,let none can have sess and kags twins(boy born first looks like father then daughter looks like kags) be born with both demon and spiritual powers of both them born with telepathy(able to read and control minds),telekenesis(able to move objects with mind),elemental abilities with fire,earth,water,wind,and lightning (be able to conjure as in make),use,and control these Kags get a special bow made by Totosai which will never need arrows and channels her demon and miko powers and will have special her get a sword made by Totosai that will channel her demon and miko powers, as well as have speaial attacks and a special barrier that will protect her and any she allows into her barrier will protect against attack and will remain up without draining any energy from her, even if she is comes up with an idea to have himself,Sess,Kags combine their strength,power to the barrier of their ancesters that surrounds the castle and lands around the castle belonging to the barrier cannot be brought down by anyone that is not family because it holds the strength of all the Tashio ancestors and is unbreakable with their added strength and power so no one can enter the barrier without them allowing them to do so or they would be purified can make it so Sess and Kag find out they gained some powers through their mating with each can have the ability to make anyone into a full demon even Inuyasha,Rin,Sango and Miroku becomes a DemonMonk like kags is a can find out that Kags grandmother was Midoriko who was also a demonmiko the last demon miko before Kags was born. We can find out through Kagomes new seerer power allows her to see that the Tashio Family and Miroku and Songo and their kids are the ones predicted to defeat an evil that wants to kill all demons in the the want to poison water supplies to make demons sterile and Kagome has to purify the waters with new extended powers she gained after she wished on the jewel became like sand and spread throughout her entire body. Her power level went sky barriers,poisons,potions,spells,enchantments ,pufification powers all her powers increased ten the jewel was created by her grandmother and she was born with the jewel inside her, the KAMI chose her to be the main one to save Demonkind from has to purify the waters ,create an antidote to the poison put in the water to make demons sterile,and she with the help of Mirokuand shippo using his fox magic create and enbue rings,bracelets,earrings,necklaces to conceal their demon attributes from all others for the future,it also makes it so they can change there look to what they want to look like and so they can change the sences to block loud noises and stink pollution of the you like some of my suggestions for your story .Keep up the good work and hope to see lots more chapters real soon im starving for chapters to read...thanx Teresa.
xxoikilluoxx chapter 13 . 10/12/2011
loiv it so far plese continue it i love it
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