Reviews for Impending Doom |
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![]() ![]() I actually like this part 2 better than its precedent! Thank you for writing it. Though the story revolved more about Kagome and Sesshomaru than the Shikon adventure (of course that is what most fanfics highlight, relationships and character development), the gradual exposition of the depth of longing, pining, intentions and consequent reactions are just right. Not wordy. I enjoyed the play on words, what with allusions to Sesshomaru being a dog demon, innuendos, the echo of maximum whenever pleasure was mentioned and Kagome's supplication to higher beings. It's fun! I also liked that it seemed Rin was into Sesshomaru's insistent plotting to pressure Kagome to give in and how both were blinded by the internal implications of their actions (how Sesshomaru was partly courting her into being seduced because he thought that Kagome was "in heat", how Kagome was turning Sesshomaru's offer down because she assumed he was simply a lustful demon) which belies their special regard for each other. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was fun and surprising sweet. Great job! |
![]() ![]() I so love this two ...please write more about them , maybe longer too ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL Love, live, love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omgosh! ! so sweet! ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome read! Ty! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This and the other one shot were great! I laughed my butt off and also did a couple “awwws.” Thanks for sharing! S.B. |
![]() ![]() ![]() pleasure? maximum. hotel? trivago. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my GOD...YOU are freaking AMAZING. LOLOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sesshomaru is a little shit but also sweet and I’m living for it, also, Kagome suggesting wolves automatically had me thinking “Kouga is so fucked.” Seriously how have I not stumbled upon your fics before you’re hilarious. |
![]() ![]() This was so funny and enjoyable! I legit laughed out loud at a few scenes (especially at every mention of "maximum pleasure" of Kagome's. I also feel like this should definitely have been continued! The chemistry between them is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved this...any chance for more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read Utter Doom long ago and found you again on tumblr. This didn't really have the same humorous vibe as UD, but it was incredibly sweet. Kagome's teechorous mind supplementing Sesshou's seductive words for her own was quite funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has nothing to do with the first one, except for his OOCness. Other than that they are separate. Now I am depressed. I was really wanting to see what happened when he broke time. :(... |
![]() ![]() All your Sess-Kag fics are GOLD. |