|Reviews for Meant to be|
| Lady Mia chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Cute, very cute. Also a little bit choppy and pretty fast paced. Perhaps you need to slow down there and detail your plot a bit? It was a bit predictable, which would have been alright except that the dialogue towards the end (i.e. "You are so important to me.") is kind of unbelievable. Thanks for a cute snippet though! You have great potential, so keep up the good work!