|Reviews for God Tree, Family Tree|
| SableDreamer chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
A very nice, interesting concept! I liked the imagery used, and the direction you took, though there were a couple of things that bothered me.
First off, was Kagome telling the story to her daughter? If so, shouldn't there be quotation marks at the beginning and end? My second issue is that Kikyou wouldn't have been her grandmother, but Kagome’s many times removed aunt, if it was Kaede's daughter that continued the line.
Sorry for the nitpicking! Though if all I have to complain about are such tiny things, I'd say you did a fine job on the story. I'd be interested to know how Kagome learned of this, so please do write the explanation for it! I guarantee that I'll read it!
Keep up the excellent and descriptive work!