|Reviews for Continued Stories|
| IASakura chapter 2 . 5/16
... What the.
I am so sorry.
I was editing my review because I realized I read your summary wrong and this wasn't your first fic...
And then I pressed 'Post Review'...
... I am so confused, this is the first time it ever happened to me... and my review was so long, too... I had so many more good things to say after all the criticism... DDDD:
Now I am sad.
I'm so sorry. This was weird. Oh my gosh what only one review per chapter?!
... After that I will have only one chapter left D:
If I make the same mistake, the rest will be sent to your inbox... but... but...
I'm so sorry.
| IASakura chapter 3 . 5/16
I logged in for the first time in years just because I had to give you this review.
I am very picky with the atmosphere I want in any fanfiction I read involving because the way they are written in the show is amazing and precious. It is logical, but also incredibly deep and subtle and unfortunately a lot of writers fail to convey that, so I usually left my 'Code Geass nostalgia phases' feeling a bit pairing deprived...
Until I found your fic.
I wouldn't say it is without slight "flaws/mistakes" (they are not really mistakes, but I don't know how to call them. They are things you tend to do when you lack experience and stuff? There is a term for that. I know there is one, or at least there is one in French, but I really can't remember it, I'm so sorry _ ). For example, the part where C.C thinks Lelouch is a ghost is really funny, but I think it went on a little bit too long. This comes with time though and it's perfectly normal to get a bit 'carried away' in parts that we like or find funny. Then again, I wouldn't call it 'getting carried away' because after all, it's part of the fun of writing. Carrying on a certain part for too long though still breaks the natural flow of the story, so it's still a 'mistake'... okay whatever I'm totally losing my focus now! haha """"" Sorry about that...
But yeah. Your fic has mistakes, parts that feel less natural and such, but above that, you carried the atmosphere with brilliance and that, in a Code Geass fanfic, is huge. The atmosphere in Code Geass is always hinted, rarely told directly and the viewer usually has to guess what Lelouch is thinking (though from what I saw the dub makes it a bit easier, but it's still there). This, is what truly draws a lot of writers to the show. It is what makes the show an incredibly experience in storytelling despite all its flaws (like the fact that the script writers weren't able to come up with plans that would actually show Lelouch's brilliant mind). The fact that
| Reader chapter 3 . 1/19
| Khoi chapter 1 . 6/26/2016
I like your descriptions and suspense. The feels!
| Hannah chapter 3 . 1/22/2016
Hey i know how old this is but can i just say you have an amazing and unique style of writing. This is great. If you're still writing 6 years later keep up the good work!
| One the Red-Eyed chapter 3 . 11/1/2015
I didn't have a chance to read it, the moment you posted it because I didn't even know that something like does even exist... But... I am grateful, that you wrote it. I can call it my official Code Geass ending, because... Because it's beautiful! 1. Funny, 2. Deep, 3. Includes events that I actually considered to happen. What more can I say? I will quote The Beatles song. All you need is love! Thank you for writing it!
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/15/2015
Oh my god , this was actually insanely good...I consider this the official continuation of the anime's ending...out of all the fanfic I've read so far , this was the only one that stirred my feelings in such a way. Thank you...
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/4/2015
Will you write more stuff like this? Its really sweet its great! Also: “Besides if a burning house with you and Cheese-kun were in it, I’d grab you first... To act as a shield for Cheese-kun of course.”. HA! PRICELESS! Anyway keep it up, gambate on your next work, Dilittante-san!
| Ghibli Ninja chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
What are you talking about? C.C. is not OOC at all. Despite the fact that she admits her love for Lelouch, she is still in-character. Because by this time, she has already been softened by at least 2 years of living with Lelouch. So of course she would at least ruminate on how she feels about him.
| MeldonElraenhie chapter 3 . 6/14/2014
Did you mention OOC? I find that it fits perfectly with the series lore. It's a perfect "pre" and "post" story for the ending. They speak with the romantic humor we see in the series and the show's quotes fit also well. I really loved reading it.
Thank you very much for writing it.
All hail LLxCC!
| uchihatetsu chapter 3 . 5/17/2014
may the greatest Lelouch and C.C love story
| LE ULTIMATE RANDOM PANTZ chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
its ok punny but stupid sometimes i think im reading my own crap
| Shiroraven chapter 3 . 6/20/2013
Why does good stories are always left undone...
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/14/2013
I love your story. I read it plenty of times now :D and me too! The initials of my name is 'C.C.' My first name isnt my penname so dont be bothered xD
| God Fenrir chapter 3 . 5/20/2013
so cute! please continue it! i want to read more :3