Reviews for PickUp Lines and Comebacks
jhamerter chapter 1 . 6/12
Good story.
dragonhero45 chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Wow, I laughed at a lot of these. The fluff was good as well.
bea012 chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Hahahaa XDDD imagining it makes me lol. Thumbs up for the pickup lines and comebacks! They rock ;)
The Impossible Dreamer chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
This was soooo fun to read! Thank you!
taking it easy chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Nice one, I loved it. )
Phobiakat chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
that was so cute. and those come backs are golden!
FF8cerberus chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Hilarious! It reminds me of Beast Boy and Raven's relationship. Great story.
In tour dreams as well chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Awww this was so cute and funny
Ame-chan777 chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
I love the alphabet comeback. Now that was funny! Qoute from the story: "If I could rearrange the alphabet, I would put u and i together." "If I could rearrange the alphabet, I would put f and u together." That's just too funny! XD.
DayDreaming0f y0u chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
LOL! These were great! I loved it. It was so simple and hilarious!
someone chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
wow- i'd really like more stories like these

the lines and comebacks are awesome! ;p
Apex Soldier chapter 1 . 11/24/2010

Awesome one shot..

Very original and hilarious...
Rose Tiger chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Hinata got jokes. I love it.
hiNAru Aburame chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
... jajaja, great xD
ImmortalSephiroth chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Decenty written story, but the way its written, this could be any couple. There's nothing here to say that this is Hinata or Naruto.
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