Reviews for Alternative Arrangements |
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![]() ![]() First off EWWWW. Edward post tanya is NOT one I like. I hated Edward from the get go. He cheated on Bella. He was WITH tanya while they were courting. Funny that he didn't find it wrong then but only after marriage. Also I find it hard to believe that he loved tanwhore THAT much and he didn't ask her to marry him and then discarded her so easily. Im also confused because after he went to see her he was questioning how well he actually knew her...just because she was mad that he wouldn't come and see her like he SAID he would? One fight and hes questioning everything? It seems to me that Edward only lusted after her and that his love isn't worth shit because he gives it away so easily. And Im surprised that when he explained that he went to see tanya to bella he never actually said that he didn't cheat on her. He said that he thought adultery was wrong and that it wouldn't happen again. It honestly sounded like he did cheat but wouldn't do it in the future. I thought bella would be smart enough to pick up on that, she didn't. Poor Bella, not only is she a moron but she married a whore. Tsk tsk. |
![]() ![]() That was total shit, well written shit, but shit just the same! Edward loving Tanya? Shes a cum dumpster. |
![]() ![]() any Edward that fucks tanwhore denali isn't a Edward I want with bella, shes so fucking gross! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a sweet story! But I would have hated to be a woman back then, with few rights and double standards. Hmmmm. Thanx for sharing! (P.S. PLEASE finish Bright Like the Sun! I love that story!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Super cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed reading this very well written piece of historical fiction. The characters were realistic in their flaws and the era portrayed the expectations of life for young adults. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish it was longer. Have you ever thought of continuing it? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aw man i wish you'dcontinue this. The dior scene where rob went to camille backstage kept playing in my head lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoy your writing. You paint the characters and their world very vividly and then drop us, the reader, into it to enjoy. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simple and fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this story is very realistic. I wish you will continue this :) thx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool. :) You never hear stories making this side of the relationship the "good" side. |