|Reviews for A Trainers Start|
| Aoi Hyoudou chapter 2 . 10/27/2010
Once again, need to separate the paragraphs when someone new is talking. Ur paragraphs r just too long and cramped together.
Over all, it was a good chapter.
| Aoi Hyoudou chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
It's a good chapter. But u need to separate the paragraphs when a new person is talking.
| Torchix chapter 3 . 10/18/2010
Awesome end to the story! This is really going to be a big help remembering the data about your characters for SR! Again, Awesome!
| Torchix chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
This is a good story, though I did find it a little hard to read because of the lack of new lines for new speakers.
I'll keep track of this one. Again, good story.