|Reviews for Wrenfield Hall|
| Guest chapter 27 . 1/10
Aww brotherhood, so amazing and powerful. Your writing is sensational.
| Guest chapter 26 . 1/10
Incredible story, I love this so much.
| Guest chapter 25 . 1/10
Beautiful chapter, it made me cry!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/10
| boringEvelyn chapter 28 . 1/4
I just want to say that with this being your first creative writing story, I WISH I could have wrote like this when I first started writing. I guess it helps being a newspaper reporter and all.
And you say that there were a lot of errors, but I really didn't notice any. I definitely didn't notice the fact that she had, in fact, been in Edward's room before, until you mentioned it. You did a really good job with grammar and the natural flow of things. As a writer, I sometimes reach a certain point where it's hard to write and it comes out forced.
I think it would be a great idea to write the sequel you mentioned, with the children. I would definitely be reading that. But it's already been four years down the road, so there's no telling.
I really enjoyed this story! Just wanted to let you know. :)
| Nuna Hatem chapter 1 . 1/3
WOW. I've probably read this story about a dozen times now- and it's still as great as it was the first time. I tried to review chapter 25, 26, 27 AND ch 28 but it seems that I've already left a review on them, one of the many times I've read this story. But I have read it all, and I'm leaving the review here because I can't stand the thought if not leaving another review and telling how fantastic this is... Anyways.
I love all the bumps, ups and downs in this story. Edward accepted the fact that she was a maid, then he had to marry Tanya, but then he finds a loophole and proposes to Bella BUT then he's forced to propose to Tanya... I was fairly sure that that was the end of it. He would have to marry Tanya. But then he found Bella, and he's married her and I just love happy endings! This story is amazing. Keep writing!
P.S: congrats in your daughter! I'm sure she's lovely! :)
| Guest chapter 28 . 1/2
This is the absolute best most delicious story I have ever read in my entire life. Excuse the punctuation. You are the absolute best writer in the world. I really felt the characters, BUT CHONSTROCTIVE CRITISCISM: you don't have to read! Bella should have stayed mad at Edward the slightest bit longer. Made Edward chase after her in Venice. Reyna_Gant
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/2
It's so sad and makes me so angry all at the same time. I was literally crying during this chapter.
Best writer ever,
| xxxVolturixxx chapter 28 . 12/22/2013
Just so lovely - thank you!
| TrisFoster chapter 28 . 12/18/2013
I just wanted to say that I simply loved your story, from the summary to the last chapter. Seriously, Wrenfield Hall is one of my favorite stories EVER. I loved, loved, loved it!
Your way of writing reminded me a lot of old english novels. And I recognized the inflence of Jane Eyre is this story since the summary, but what I liked most is that you were capable of make an amazing story of your own. And, for me, the relationship of Bella and Edward is one of the great things about Wrenfield. It was sweet and kind of innocent and I loved reading the development of it.
Okay. Sorry the long review, but you and your story deserved a feedback (even if it comes two years since the last chapter was posted :D)
Congrats for your talent and thanks for sharing this incredible story!
Ps.: Sorry if there is too many spelling errors, but English is not my first language.
| jm1708 chapter 28 . 12/11/2013
I just found this gem of a story. I do not remember but I sincerely endeavor to acknowledge the recommendation. I was unable to do anything but read this wonder you've written, is a beauty, the emotions that you transmit your words, heartache, laughter, love, cried, laughed, fell in love, just because this Bella and her Edward. This story is perfect.
| SapphiRubyCrys chapter 6 . 12/4/2013
Aliceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee is here! Hurray!
| pauleen chapter 27 . 12/3/2013
O liked that everyone learned something and grew from it. Well done chapter.
| Multitaskmom chapter 28 . 12/3/2013
Loved it. Thank you.
| pauleen chapter 26 . 12/2/2013
Edward found a goldmine in Bella. She is quit the renaissance woman.