|Reviews for Pandora's Box|
| Jedi Alice chapter 1 . 2/9/2016
I think a little hate must've gotten into that vial, since Alice reacted with anger to him forcing it on her.
| TekoloKuautli chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
It was a great one-shot, it must have been quite a shock that it worked so well haha
| darkfox360 chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
Hi, Alea, and thanks for entering the contest!
That was an excellent start! I couldn't spot any grammatical errors so far, so that's all good.
Interesting theory, about the potion. Your prose is good (I actually enjoy this kind of formal writing, rather than the usual, silly, giggle nonsense.)
Thanks for entering, and good luck!
| Pasty face chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
That was awesome! Keep it up!
| EarthRiddle chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
What a wonderful story. Really captures Peter's predicament rather well. Nightmare's characterization is top-notch.
I'm becoming something of a fan of your writing. Keep it up, please.