|Reviews for Dancing in the Darkness|
| laurendee chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
This is a great story. You addressed Derek's finding out about the miscarriage very nicely, and you are a talented writer. Would love to see more from you!
| merdermcdreaming chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
This was beautiful. I really loved it! ] Great writing, you have talent.
| CileSuns92 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Wow, the ending simply wow. Great story!
| atl987 chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
love it! this would have been a great extension to the show
| skylite55 chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
I enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing.
| DakotaLady chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Beautiful ... Thank you for sharing your story.
| x.dolcee chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
Hey there! Dropping by to leave you some feedback! :D
I really like the way you interpreted them. It's always interesting to see how other writers depict the same issue in a different scene and way! I loved Mer calling Der senile about the whole driving thing LOL.
And also, loved the song reference. I'm way too lazy to do that. :P I agree with you - Derek would definitely have blamed himself in some way (if we'd gotten the chance to see it on the show...).
You should write more too! :)
| hotarunoko chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
Really cute story :) I wish we'd have gotten a scene with them in bed after the day
| stilllovesgreys chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Great first story, Thanks!
| infinites chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
I had to review because that was amazing. Can't wait for your next story.
| Vanessa chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
This was so beautiful. Loved Mer's speech about the mines.
| AiLing chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Gosh, I love this! I love Mer's speech towards the end...Mer's awesome...and so strong..
| sunshine and pink skies chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
beautiful, wonderful one-shot.