Wow. I'm glad my OC's aren't like that. (Are they?) Even if one IS named Sakura. Sakura is kind of Sue-ish. (Oh no!) I wonder if my characters are Sues!

Bye-ni!

hmm... nice! could you send me some pokemon sue stories please? you know, just for the lolz, I am ''mystery umbreon'' my internet is just being weird now, also, you could make a chapter with the oh so dreaded pokemorph/hybrid sues, you know the lot ;)

hmm... nice! could you send me some pokemon sue stories please? you know, just for the lolz, I am ''mystery umbreon'' my internet is just being weird now, also, you could make a chapter with the oh so dreaded pokemorph/hybrid sues, you know the lot ;)

Lol, great chapter. God Sue's scare me. Speaking of scary, I just looked up and I was like, whoa, why is this classified as Horror/ Parody? ANd then I was like...OMG that's hilarious! And that is totally true! Mary Sues ARE terrifying! And then I had like a mini spaz attack cause I was laughing so hard...yeah. I'm weird like that. Don't let it scare you. I'm not as scary as a Mary Sue, so really don't worry.

This was really painful to write, wasn't it?

You have my sympathies.

Wow, God Sue, that's new to me xD OMG two sues next time - yay!

XDXDXD Oh my god, I know this is meant to be a guide, but I was cracking up through the whole Mary-Sue one!

Just so you know, making your OC with blond curly hair doesn't make them a Mary-Sue. I'm a curly blond, and heck I know I'm not a Mary Sue, and nor is my character. I'm not sure if that was intended or not, but I do agree, it is a stereotype.

The Angsty Sue one was pretty interesting. I HATE Angsty Sues! I try to avoid them at all costs. I make my OC's have a pretty normal life, and try to avoid the unfortunate deaths and oh so magical limos that appear magically on time.

Anyways, keep writing! I love this!

I agree with everywhere you're coming from. I just started a pokemon story with my own, made-up character.

Thank Arceus that I'm not making these mistakes. Your advice is good and I'll pay attention to it.

Also, do you see praying to the legendaries as over-dramatic. It's an original idea, but I think I've stretched the poképhilosiphy pretty far.

What the heck; this is Fanfiction! I write the rules!

LOL. This story is classified as Horror XD

Yay! Thanks for updating :) I don't mind being embarrassed, the advice will be worth it 8D

funny chapter! can you make a chapter two for this story?

Haha, as if someone could randomly be given Mews xD So this is what people mean by Mary Sues.. I never really knew what people meant by her...I hope my characters are not Mary Sues...damni it,they probably are o.e

I'm slightly suprised that no one skipped the author notes and posted a review saying 'update plox' :P Yet, anyway.

But yeah. You made some very valid points. I agree with the legendary starters/eevee starters. Eck, it gets annoying.

Now if only the Suethors would actually take advice. Oh, and use spell check. But that's another story.

Mary Sue should get a friend named like Sakura Mitsubishi or something XD

I agree. Never legendaries. (Or Eevee)

And if it weren't for the *** holes that moniter anime content, every girl would be raped within seconds.

I'm not talking about screaming and shoved against a tree rape.

I'm talking serious gun to the head, cigarett burn smiley faces, a bottle of whiskey, and lubed down with Walrein oil.