Reviews for War of the Biju: Fourth Shinobi World War
Guest chapter 12 . 11/18
Thats whole part with orchi taking over ko's body just to leave him and kill him AFTER saying that he wasn't going to die.. AND he has an unsealed main branch member made zero sense at all
Chewie Cookies chapter 29 . 11/17
Ooooh, Orochimaru be scheming! Loved this chapter, friend! The fluff, the action, the EVERYTHING!

Keep up the good work!
airnaruto45 chapter 29 . 11/15
mind addressing why you brought the Shin clone bodies into the fray as the elephant in the room.
vampireharry the 2 chapter 29 . 11/15
Another awesome chapter! Keep up the great work!
KarolineUzumaki chapter 29 . 11/15
I just read this fic and I liked it but I feel in the in the altered power levels ruined it for me. Why? While its nice to see Konoha 11 playing a bigger role I feel only Naruto and Sasuke should be OPd. Powering up ever character and missing with the power levels ruined for me but good story.
61394 chapter 29 . 11/15
great the multieyed nutcase is here
Arch Dragon761 chapter 29 . 11/15
this is awesome when will more be out
YamiChaos27 chapter 29 . 11/15
Including Shin into the mix eh? I'm currently wondering if you're gonna bring the Tenseigan into the mix at some point. Like maybe around the same time Hagoromo contacts Naruto and Sasuke, you could have Hamura contact Hinata and she gets the Tenseigan. That's my hope at least.
Guest chapter 29 . 11/15
About Homura and Koharu taking action... I wouldn't be surprised if their prior motivations were influenced by the Izanagi technique used by Danzo... Remember, Danzo tried to do that to Mifune but was caught in the act in canon... Anyway, even if those two are finally taking action, I still think they should be put in prison AFTER the war for crimes against humanity (because Itachi's role in the Uchiha Clan Massacre was forced upon him by the those two AND Danzo)...
Guest chapter 29 . 11/15
1. It would interesting to see how much Shin Uchiha (and his clones) would affect the course of the war. It was never clear if he had actually died or not in Gaiden...

2. Not to be pushy or anything, but I'm hoping we'll see more of Rin Nohara now that Danzo is dead...
Rose Tiger chapter 29 . 11/15
Love the naruhina kiss. Keep going.
thor94 chapter 29 . 11/15
basically, you changed some thing in this AU, like giving some strong PU to everyone, EXCEPTED naruto.
Beside the commandant rank which is more an icon title without real authority, naruto is mostly the same as manga with same skills: a clone and not perfect rasengan (he need clone or extra arms to do it) spammer who always rely on kyuubi chakra for power. no new badass skill like uzumaki seal master able to create and spam army killer and mass destruction fuinjutsu, no badass elemental jutsu able to wipe out an entire region or mountain in a single breath, no godlike bloodline, etc.

I think your plan to have naruto and sasuke final battle before tobi is because most of people know that in manga, there was no ways naruto could even reallistic tie or win against his rival filled with his godlike rinne-sharingan, all bijuu beside an half kurama and some senju skill. if he wanted sasuke could have kick and kill naruto on the ground in matter of seconds with a genjutsu, or suppress kyuubi and sage chakra or using captured bijuu.
Leaf Ranger chapter 29 . 11/15
Huh. Interesting chapter overall. Glad to see Konoha survived the battle with relative ease. *nods*

Keep up the good work!
SkywardStrike chapter 1 . 11/15
Shin Uchiha, huh...that was actually a pleasant surprise.
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 29 . 11/15
great chapter as usual
well worth the wait.
...quick question, could Naruto create charka arms that have more physical mass to them? you know the giant bird thing that happened after Neji's death? that, but on a smaller scale...
anyway, keep up the good work as always
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