|Reviews for War of the Biju: Fourth Shinobi World War|
| Eaglestorm27 chapter 33 . 6/17
I 'm really impressed for that chapter ! I mean it speak so long about the final we will have for your fan fic with a massive amount of power level , jutsu and tactic prowess . Now i have an question : If Naruto and Sasuke are already on par with the level of Hashirama and Madara does that mean when they will acquire the power of Hagoromo , well they will become really godike . I have so hated the naruto hokage of the series he's look like obito and he's become rusty i hope you will fix that like making Naruto create a law that every kage must becoming strong to protect their people . Also when Naruto will acquire the other half of Kurama and will maybe acquire a much more powerful sage form like the hashirama sage form with also an increase of his chakra level and fighting prowess in base form . I hope the next chapter will be very fun to read like this one
| windwolf777 chapter 33 . 6/5
"Its subtle" It's
"Its true then" It's
WHAT THE FUCK TEMERI IS A FUCKING CAT SAGE!? THAT'S AMAZING!
"THATS BRUTAL!" That's
"Its called the" It's
"but its not over yet" it's
HOLY SHIT SHUKAKU CHAKRA CLOAK! Holy fucking shit this is amazing! Can't wait for more
| windwolf777 chapter 32 . 6/5
"Its definitely not like our last battles..." It's
"Damn, its huge" it's
"ugh its like I'm talking with Karin" it's
"now its been snuffed out" it's
"Its not too bad here" It's
DefeatFriendship no Jutsu ftw!
| windwolf777 chapter 31 . 6/5
"and for what its worth" it's
"Its why Danz" It's
"...your right. Its good" you're. It's
"...its my fault" It's
"...your right" you're
"Its...like fighting..." It's
"Its...Nagato's strongest..." It's
"..defeated its time.." it's
Another really nice chapter! Need to work on your contractions a little bit but really nice, descriptive writing. Just as a heads up:
"its" shows ownership, "it's" is it is
"your(s)" is ownership, "you're" is you are
I'm not trying to be rude or anything, just trying to help. Like I said though, loving this fic!
| windwolf777 chapter 28 . 6/4
Holy shit that was fucking amazing again! I can't wait to see if it's just Hinata who will get some of the beasts' power or if it will be split. (Like Choji getting some of Son's, or Shino getting some of Chomei's power, etc)
| windwolf777 chapter 27 . 6/4
"...who used to edo tensei kages.." two. But another fucking amazing chapter...One of the best fics I've read. If you want I can help with some very minor mistakes once I reread this one after I finish it
| windwolf777 chapter 25 . 6/4
Holy shit another fucking amazing battle. Nice
| windwolf777 chapter 24 . 6/4
Holy shit...I fucking love that Naruto trusts Kurama enough to let him free...That's fucking amazing...And he fight against the brothers was awesome!
| windwolf777 chapter 23 . 6/4
God...fucking amazing like always...!
| windwolf777 chapter 22 . 6/4
Holy shit...Hiashi's death was so fucking touching...nice chapter...OH MY FUCKING GOD THAT NOTE! God damnit...I'm tearing up from it...Very well done...Reading the next one now!
| windwolf777 chapter 21 . 6/4
"its...its enormous" it's...it's
"gave a thumb's up to his younger opponent" Nice touch :)
"its like" it's
"Its like he's just toying" it's
Another fucking amazing chapter!
| windwolf777 chapter 20 . 6/4
"..its faint" it's
"..its in the past" it's
"Oh its not" it's
"Its just like my master" It's
Another fucking amazing chapter holy shit
| windwolf777 chapter 19 . 6/4
HOLY SHIT THE FUCKING GATES 64 PALM! THAT IS FUCKING AMAZING!
"No...its too late" it's
Holy shit the Shino hype! That was fucking amazing!
I'm tired so I probably missed some very minor errors to try to help you fix. I'm sorry I keep pointing them out. I only do it for fics I love so they can be the best they can be. And yours is absolutely one of them
| windwolf777 chapter 18 . 6/4
"Its the effects of" It's
"...its to be expected" it's
"but a enemy" an
I got too bored to look for corrections but another sweet chapter
| windwolf777 chapter 16 . 6/3
Its time you remembered" it's
Since its time I put an end to this" it's
Tenko sad" said
Another interesting chapter. Not bad