|Reviews for Be Honest|
| HayHayy chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
I looooved this. Leah is so hilarious. I nearly died laughing after she kissed him and was thinking about the "alpha female".
Awesome poem. It was unique and original. :)Great job.
| BrokenSofia chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
OHHH, I loved this one!
Especially since it had my sexy god Taylor Hotner!
Again, loved the poem. :]
| wolfsbane92 chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
YAYYYYYY! heartheartheartheartheart! lovelovelovelove!
For some strange reason, I had Leah in my head rapping that poem. XD It was weird but oddly entertaining.
Bahaha! 'SONOVA...JAKE! I will murder you!" lololol.
"Oh I'm sorry; I was under the false pretense that you learned how to read in elementary school."
LOL I LOVE Leah's attitude! She's so cool! And Jake is such a teddy bear under all that muscle! So huggable! So lovable! :3 Oh Jake. :) This was definitely a good thing to read after the last one about Sam, because that kind of depressed me (in a good way, it means you can manipulate people's feeling and therefore you are a good writer!). WOOO!
| o0FLAM3S0o chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
| TheSecretReader94 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
... Oh my God! who knew miss Gaby had it in her? I obviously didn't! A writer, a poet and pretty darn AWESOME!
this is really good! I am so glad we persuaded you to write! LOL
loved it, Jacob constantly slipping was funny and Paul... well... what can one say when he has a teeny tiny mention, me heart still fluttered! LOL LOVED THIS STORY!
Leah is such a babe! reminds me of another leah, Ha ha jokes! Great job! I totally loved this! I am really looking forward to your next story, (hint hint) hee hee
gaby-tastic work! excellent poem, so original! perfect!
Lots of love,
| restlessxpen chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Aw! :3 That was cuuute! I'm not usually a fluff person, but that was a nice, warm read. Good work, and congrats on churning out your first fic on ffnet. That's just awesome. ;) Of course, Leah and Jacob are a pairing you just can't go wrong with, and I liked your take on Leah.
"we could change the title to "ALPHA FEMALE", I guess I don't have to tell you how that went."
Probably my favorite line. xD Totally something I could see Leah doing, and it was easy to imagine what the guys would have said, how appalled they must have been. ;) Really great fic, girl. Glad you told me about it so I could check it out. You should keep writing! I could tell by the story that you enjoyed it, and, really, that's all that matters. So get to writing some more and let me know how it goes! )
| briannabobanna chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Well, considering the title of this story is 'Be Honest', I'm going to 'Be Honest' and say that I never gave a chance to the Blackwatet pairing.
But this... It's got me wanting to rummage around FanFiction for more of the likes. It was just so damn cute, but in a way that it was Leah-cute. Catch my drift? (ProbablyNot). By that, I mean... I can sit here reading this and I can think, 'That's totally something Leah would say'! You just wrote so... In character, you totally tapped right into Leah's (LEE-LAH!) mind. It was believable, and it was real. Something I could actually see Leah saying, thinking and doing.
& Don't even get me started on the emotions of this story. They were so... Pure and true. I could connect to the story so well because of them, because what she was feeling... As I said before, it was 'real'. Pure and true and real and believable and wonderful and cute and amazing and HONEST.
I love you so much, big sis! You're an amazing writer, and If you really enjoy it... Write your heart out! I'd LOVE to read more. :)
| miriamne chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
For your "first shot" at a "one shot" you did great! This is a really sweet story!
| WolfGirlAtHeart chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
I LOVE IT and YOU! :D Seriously, though it's really good! I was reading fast like I always read your messages and had to force myself to not hear "Gaby" and hear "Leah" instead, LOL.
But I loved how you tap into all of those confused emotions and I TOLD you that you could write ;)
LOVE YOU, Gabita!
| brankel1 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
| f4life chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
GIRL! That was really really great. Made out of pure amazingness! It was so touching and so so Leah. I never imagined her writing poetry until now and it suits her a lot. And the poem was just fantastic, honestly you have talent.
Great job hon! xxx
| gone1.gone2.gone3 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
;D Hey gaby! I was so excited when you messaged me saying you wrote a story! I was hopeing you'd write soon!
It was awsome! I loved it especially how Leah kissed Jake and he froze! haha made me laugh!
ooohhhh! and can't forget Jake's adorable speech at the end...*sigh* how lucky would a girl be to have a guy (a hot Jacob Black) say something like that to her...LoL
You have to Write more! If that was awsome you'd definatley make MORE awsome ones! ;D