I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, this story is really good:) and just a safe bet, but those guys at the end are reapers, right? Oh and continue the good work:)

Ichigo gets 1000 points to Gryffindor for TELLING THE TOAD WHAT'S ON HIS MIND and walk out her class (and destroying the door) like the badass he is:)

really like the story, but i'm kind of worried. no update in in over a year? have you gone off to Seiretei yet?

Oh my goodness I was so torn between excitement and fear when I saw that I was on the last chapter... This is a beautiful fic. Thank you for writing it - I haven't seen such a well-written crossover in a long, long time. I hope you'll be continuing it, because your plotting and characterisation are both brilliant. I eagerly await the next chapter!

God knows Ichigo needs Rukia.

I think Ichigo and Rukia should get married. Yes, that's it. And who knows, maybe she has an inner hollow.

Ichiruki. Because, dammit, people deserve happy endings. Especially them.

I've read HEAPS of HP-Bleach crossovers but this is my favourite! I know that you're really busy but... Please, Please, Please, Please post more chapters!

Sorry, *soon

Wow, just finished reading this for the first time, and I LOVE it! I can't wait until the next update, so please post chapter 20 emsoon/em!

epic story so far gonna put this in my favourites

Huh, really intrigued about the world-building you've got up behind the scenes o.o Most Bleach (xover) fics tend to shy away from it after all (atleast the few I've read) so really interested about Avalon and whatever system is in place over here, looking forward to finding out :) Hopefully you have everything planned out already, as the clues you've been dropping have totally piqued my interest.

Real nice fic overall here. The only complaint I have would probably be back in chapter12, where a chunk of the beginning had to be mandatorily skipped over due to not being in english :/ that was a major bummer, if you have wanted us to see what Harry saw you'd have been better off just describing the two yammering at each other to be honest :/ that was by far the worse segment of the entire fic, composed entirely out of dialogue that might be plot relevant but completely opaque to our understanding (and if not actually plot relevant, why so much dialogue given to it?) Yea, thats been bugging me for the last 7 chapters, had to get it off my chest *shrug*

As for this chapter, the whole stealing scene felt a tad bit.. well, not that well planned? hmm.. It had to be rushed and flexible, due to the circumstances.. but even then, it felt, not as well thought out as it could have been.. It felt entirely rash, as if they HAD to do it within the timelimit of the very next detention, which doesn't make that much sense unless Ron guilts everyone in to it? (being quick to temper and just having found out about the quills and all) At the very least they should have done some scouting? even if it was only being attentive during the next detention, or even something more involved. The most jarring scene for me however was Hermione taking out a law book some 5 minutes before the commencement of the plan :S what if according to the law book just having evidence of usage was enough for an investigation? more importantly, what if stealing the quills would void the investigation entirely? What if it can't be magically traced back to Umbridge (at least not in Fudge's court of law) so now they've suddenly got a smoking gun but no evidence? an extra day pouring over the law books by Hermione BEFOREHAND would have been a nice thing to do :S that just confused me is all :/

Anyways, longwinded criticisms aside, I really did enjoy reading this fic. Most Bleach/HP fics seem so ..slapdash, only crossing over at the fringes and ignoring most any of the implications of contact. This fic on the other hand seems to embrace it to some extent, and hides it all under mystery and intrigue _ so color me fascinated, really interested to see where you'll take it eventually :)

Haai! I just got around to reading your story and I absolutely love it! But I see it hasn't been updated in quite some time and I was wondering if you were still writing it?

chapter 20 please!

Oh HELL no