I really love this! You're a great descriptive writer!

EVIL EVIL EVIL! Why the stupid cliffy?

Great start! It's not super short like most introductory chapters, you've managed to tell us what's going on in the Soul Society without doing what most people do and just listing what happened, and it's very well written.

Great job so far especially considering it's your first story!

never liked how the shinigami are always descriped as ignorant of the existance of wizards even though they were around before the wizard communities were even established and went into hiding from the muggle world. i mean the the research and development department have devices used to identify unknown energies in the area like when they knew the espadas were in the real world when they kidnapped orihime. my point is that ichigo as a taicho should know about the wizards and by proxy the magical creatures. sorry about this rant its a really good well done story and im liking it so far its just one of my pet peeves about the harrypotterxbleach fandom.

It is kind of interesting and you could do a lot with this crossover. I would like to mention what another author pointed out in an earlier review with the age of Ichigo's sister. Is there a purpose to Ichigo looking younger than he actually is? You should prob. clarify that soon so your readers are not confused. with Ichigo's age he would still age cause Soul reapers still age. I feel that your character have a slightly wooden quality to them, Harry does not quite feel like Harry and same with Ichigo and other character. You seem to write angry emotions well but other times not so well. I would prob go back to Bleach and Harry Potter and spend a bit of time trying to get your characters to feel less wooden. It will help you write a better story. Other than that I really don't have much to comment on. It kid of hard to write a thorough review when only one chapter has been posted up. I hope this didn't discourage you. keep writing :D

Ooh this is a really good story! I like it! Please update soon. _ I'm glad Shirosaki is mentioned.

Intersesting, good start, keep it up. I wouldnt mind reading more. But, if you could, try to keep magic and spititual power more or less seperate, harry's an wizard, Ichigo's a shinigami. But dont let me tell you how to write your story.

good fic i want to read more

Interesting beginning and I really like the idea of Ichigo's family dumping themselves in the laps of the Dursley family. However it was pretty confusing when Ichigo was called a boy but his younger sisters were described as twenty-somethings. Does Ichigo look younger than his age because he's a soul reaper? It would be better to give a quick rundown on where you are on the Bleach and Harry Potter timelines before the story begins, so it doesn't distract from a fun story.