Reviews for Spike the Sparkling
Grizzmon chapter 15 . 7/11/2014
Let me guess, another human turns into a bot in the next chapter?
Jazzilynn Hall chapter 15 . 7/10/2014
I'm glad to see that you're working on this story again. It's been too long since you last updated and I was afraid that you had abandoned this story. It's a really good story, so the thought of it being abandoned had me really sad. I've actually been thinking over ideas for your story quite a lot. A thought on how the Autobots could get Spike back, it you don't have one planned already that is... maybe Hound could use his hologram projector and cover either himself or another Autobot with a hologram to make them look like a bot that is Neutral or something. A bot that obviously isn't one of the Autobots, or at least, on of the ones on Earth. And with a little voice modulation and Hound's holo projector, they could pull off pretending to be a completely different bot and then go to the Cons and claim to be Spike's Sire. If they say they got a message from the Autobots telling them that quote 'the Cons took your creation after you left him in our care and refuse to release him unless you come and retrieve him yourself', unquote. Knowing Seekers, and thus Thundercracker, he'd probably demand to know why the 'Sire' even left his Creation behind in the first place... but if the 'Sire' said that after losing his Sparkmate, he didn't feel that he was capable enough of taking care of a Sparkling and that's why he left his Sparkling with the Autobots. And as for how to deal with how the 'Sire' got onto the planet... that's easily dealt with by saying that the last time the space bridge was activated, he snuck through with his Sparkling. And since then, he's spent his time observing the Autobots and the Decepticons to decide who would be the better ones to care for his Sparkling. The Decepticons have the Seekers true, but the Autobots are the ones that are caring down to their Spark. Every Autobot cares, while the Decepticons only want destruction. Only the Seekers would care for the Sparkling if the Sparkling was left with them, and that's the reason the 'Sire' decided to leave his Sparkling with the Autobots. And the reason he even was watching the two armies in the first place was because he knew he wasn't capable of taking care of his Sparkling after losing his Sparkmate, so he decided that since he couldn't, the more bots that could, the better. And of course, the one to come up with all of this would be Prowl. He is the Tactical Officer after all. He makes plans for battles, so he would come up with the background for the pretend 'Sire'. All of this is just an idea... my mind went on over drive after reading chapter 10.
Titaniumwrench chapter 15 . 7/10/2014
Thanks for update
wolf girl811 chapter 15 . 7/8/2014
so does spike have earth like heritage? like other exotic traits then just his eyes?
IBrokeThe4thWall chapter 15 . 7/8/2014
It has been so long! I'm so happy that you've updated! XD

I wonder how the Cons are going to react when/if Spike gets turned back to normal.
Guest chapter 14 . 3/15/2014
This is really awesome, can't wait for the next chapter!
wolf girl811 chapter 11 . 3/10/2014
so would spike father turn transformer for his son sake? that never been touch before.
SpikesGirlfeiend chapter 14 . 1/31/2014
No trouble and he tries things he had never thought he would try
Purest of the Hearts chapter 14 . 12/26/2013
Just don't pull Ravage's tail X3
Purest of the Hearts chapter 13 . 12/26/2013
Fuck ._. BUSTED! You just fucked up poor Screamer, Spike! I have a feeling you're not gonna like the 'talk', Spike
Purest of the Hearts chapter 12 . 12/26/2013
Uh, Optimus? I think you're gonna have a hard time taking Spike back from Thundercracker...
Purest of the Hearts chapter 11 . 12/26/2013
Thundercracker's gonna be a daddy! (For now)

(Also, did you get any reviews from me? I looked up at the reviews and none of mine were there. I swear, I reviewed almost every chapter up til now, but it's not showing up :( It's possible because I reviewed on Mobile, but it's just not showing...)
DawnfireJazz chapter 2 . 12/14/2013
What do you know Shockwave does have a heart, er spark. And Spike as a sparkling, cute.
Butterfly.Heart chapter 14 . 12/6/2013
Why are you torturing me Like this, does my being in pain amuse you, more chapters!
Dragon of Yin and Yang chapter 14 . 10/20/2013
Please continue!
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