|Reviews for Spike the Sparkling|
| grimlock.trex99 chapter 14 . 10/5/2012
I think it is great. A suggestion for future chapters, you should make it so that when or if spike gets rescued he should either go with Elita one into space or Arcee should come and help take care of him on earth.
| firetype77 chapter 14 . 10/4/2012
having trouble logging into my account thanks for thanks for the update.
| SummerMistedDragon chapter 14 . 10/3/2012
Love it! Poor Sparkplug! Optimus is going to owe him big time! :):):):)
| Anakin-Jason-Skywalker-Kenobi chapter 14 . 10/3/2012
:D Hope that he does get in at least a little trouble. He's just so cute! :) -AJSK
| wolf girl811 chapter 14 . 10/3/2012
this will kind of sound weird maby just a random idea but i think if the autobot can change spike human organic body into a complete metal transformer sparkling wonder if they can change Sparkplug into an autobot or will he be a sparkling toodler cause of his age it just an idea of how sparkplug might help out his son so he wont feel helpless what parent would'nt want to help there child? heck wont be surprize if sparkplug ask to be change to help out.
i bet wheel jack could actually do it if they tried bet he be cute brings the question about what would Sparkplug look like as a transformer? ask me i think sparkplug seem like a seeker
| EHSparkwoman chapter 14 . 10/3/2012
Aw! Cute! Are you still taking name suggestions? Because I thought the name Thorn might be good for the sparkling Spike, as spikes and thorns are similar things... Are Rumble and Frenzy going to get Spike into trouble?
| Katrina Potter chapter 14 . 10/3/2012
Awww, so sweet. This really made my day, specially as I'm lying with the flue. I don't know if you have something already planned for Spike's time with the cassettes but I have an idea that could be fun. I don't know if you've ever noticed it in real life, but cats always seem to know when a person touching them is an adult or a baby. I've seen cats who'll tear your arm off if you near them, accept a baby yanking on their face and fur. It could be really fun for Spike to have a moment where he's 'man handling' Ravage a little (not to be cruel of course) and then Rumble and Frenzy being jealous of it. Other wise I think it could be sweet if Spike could have a nice moment with Soundwave too. For some odd reason, he's always been my favorite Decepticon.
| JazzNProwl's sparklingAriaFyre chapter 14 . 10/2/2012
*squeak squeal* Spike is so cute! But i'm kinda nervous of rumble and frenzy.
| StarLight837 chapter 14 . 10/2/2012
This story is amazing!
| KashiEuroDrake chapter 14 . 10/2/2012
Will starscream every find the turth plz continue…
| Rat001 chapter 14 . 10/2/2012
This is very nice.
| Liz chapter 14 . 10/2/2012
I really love this story...it gives me the warm fuzzies:) just wanted to point out that admonished is the word you were looking for. Abolished means to end something.
| general zargon chapter 14 . 10/2/2012
LOL, I love the mention of Megatron's cannon being painted, and the idea of Spike framing Starscream is hilarious! Sparkling mischief, commence! I'm glad Spike's having a good time being a Cybertronian baby, but I'm hoping he gets back to the Autobots soon!...Ravage is my favorite cassette (although I think it's a he), so thank you for including her/him! :D Please keep up the great work and update soon!
| Lambor Terror Lep chapter 14 . 10/2/2012
Awsome chapter please update soon.
| Fox of Magic chapter 14 . 10/2/2012
Love this! Update soon please!