Reviews for Temporality |
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erstwhile-S chapter 2 . 6/11/2024 Lovely story, especially Hermione, Harry and Ron finding their way back to one another. |
Spinalittleglow chapter 3 . 4/16/2023 I love this story, I like the pacing and the how the characters are written. They are all flawed and feel real. Sirius has anger issues and is without a question a bully well into adulthood and we get to see how this affects his relationship with Hermione. I also love Regulus and honestly, I love how the trio, especially Harry and Hermione, were able to rebuild their friendship |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/29/2022 So I really enjoyed the vast majority of this story, but I found myself frustrated at the end. First, it was strange that the basic hair care/grooming charm Sirius threw at her as he left her office would have changed the actual color of her hair. It was also bizarre to me that this Hermione would have kept that potion in her bathroom with all her other stuff, instead of locked away and warded with the time-turner. But mostly I feel like it was a bit pointless to do that whole realizing they smell each other with the amortentia scene if it wasn't going to become useful later. How did he not recognize her scent in the RoR? Or how did he not at least make the connection at that picnic as Padfoot, with the scent and then her looks? It seems like her hair is rather memorable. I would have thought at that point his memory would have been jogged. And there were actually hints in the story that made it seem like Sirius and Regulus were both making connections. I was expecting them to heavily suspect and take measures to find out. So it was very strange to have her show up for that ceremony in the DoM and have both of them so shocked and livid, as if they had zero inkling. Finally, I'm actually a bit disappointed she didn't follow through and spend at least a little time away from Britain and everything/everyone there. It really seemed like she needed it, and honestly it would have been a nice way for Sirius to actually finally spend some time growing up emotionally and to have to do a little work to get the girl. It just felt like there were a number of set-ups that were never actualized. There was also so much here that was wonderful. Her pranking him was hilarious and I love what she was doing with runes and charms. I loved all the detailed Black family history in the beginning. I loved her helping Peter gain his confidence and self-worth and her relationship with Regulus in both times. There were a lot of interactions I found to be laugh out loud funny. It was overall a really enjoyable read. Not signed in: DiamondNightSkies |
Jasminny chapter 3 . 5/22/2022 Hmm it doesn't seem like my review ever posted so guest reviewing this instead. I loved this chapter. I loved how you showed Hermione's thought process of living two converged lives. I love the prank war that she and Sirius got up to. I love how the discovery happened and the fact that James looked so confused when she showed up as Andromache and the little clues you gave us along the way. I love the resulting shout matches and confusion. I love the Please Don't Go's and Hermione's quip where she says aren't you going to ask me not to go? I love the ending and the way that it was written to make it seem like Sirius/Hermione's wedding until you get to the last sentence of the first paragraph about the twins (I had to reread because I was confused which means it was beautifully written). I am a sucker for time travel fics, specifically with Sirius and Hermione. And this is one of the best. I love how succinct but well thought out it is. Thank you for sharing! |
Jasminny chapter 3 . 5/21/2022 Hmm it doesn't seem like my review ever posted. I loved this chapter. I loved how you showed Hermione's thought process of living two converged lives. I love the prank war that she and Sirius got up to. I love how the discovery happened and the fact that James looked so confused when she showed up as Andromache and the little clues you gave us along the way. I love the resulting shout matches and confusion. I love the ending and the way that it was written to make it seem like Sirius/Hermione's wedding until you get to the last sentence of the first paragraph about the twins. I am a sucker for time travel fics, specifically with Sirius and Hermione. And this is one of the best. I love how succinct but well thought out it is. Thank you for sharing! |
erstwhile-S chapter 3 . 5/2/2022 Enjoyed this a lot. All of them surviving was fantastic, and it was so very heartwarming that Hermione, Harry and Ron became friends again. Thanks! |
Jasminny chapter 2 . 3/27/2022 Ooh this chapter was amazing. I love the little pockets of memories that we get. It scratched the Sirmione itch while being a quickish read. The dynamics were just so perfect |
Jasminny chapter 1 . 3/27/2022 Wow I loved this chapter. The bit with the rare, aware-Ron was so hard to read through but so well done. I hate this reality that you created but it was done so beautifully and I know you had to to set up a bad enough future to warrant Hermione risking everything to go back. Whew. I can't wait to read the other two chapters |
Vampire-Chick91 chapter 3 . 2/13/2022 This was such a great story and very unique in the plot |
x-eleven chapter 3 . 11/30/2021 There are a lot of time travel fics, but this is one of the few done right. No excuses for why history can't be changed, or why no one can go back to stop Voldemort before he gets started. I also like how, as much as Hermione's present sucks, there are still sacrifices to be made on her part to make a better present. Well done. |
Kate chapter 3 . 9/24/2021 I- this story evokes so many emotions in me. I was sad and happy and hurt and everything in between. The last chapter of her dealing with the aftermath was insanely good, arguably my favorite out of all three chapters. Hermione’s relationship with Regulus both in the 70s and the new present was so pure and is one of the best things in this story. And fuck those scenes with Sirius towards the end really tugs at me. Loving how she’s rebuilding her life slowly, and accepting that while she may never have what she had before, does not mean she can’t have something good and new either. Thank you for sharing this with us! |
anneliese chapter 1 . 9/4/2021 beautiful |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/12/2021 That was just amazing and I loved it so much I loved all of them but especially Reg thanks so much for sharing this story with us! ️️ |
bibliopuff chapter 3 . 5/30/2021 it's five in the morning and i bloody cry after finished this story. it makes me emotional. I've read thousands of fics before yet I've never read one like this before. it's a bummer this fic only has three chapters because i need more of them. definitely 10 out of 5 stars. thank you so much for creating a masterpiece like this! |
bibliopuff chapter 2 . 5/30/2021 gahhh scene number 11 made me cry like an emotional baby |