|Reviews for The Shopkeepers Plan|
| InuSBfan87 chapter 1 . 2/17
This is a really good story so far. Please continue, this is so interesting. I have been patiently waiting for a new chapter.
| Kazuyo chapter 3 . 7/11/2014
AWESOME! This story is so reat I can't believe I had not read it before! I hope you continue, it would break my heart if you dont...
I'm worried about Miroku's intentions (I hope they don't hurt Inuyasha more!) and what is this secret that makes Inuyasha "worthy" of attention so suddenly.
Keep up the good work!
| Juliakaze26 chapter 3 . 6/27/2014
I do hope this ends being Kouga/Inuyasha...and please do update...really like where this is going !
| cutepuppy21 chapter 3 . 6/22/2014
SESSHOMARU I SHOULD BEAT YOUR ASS ALL THE WAY TO DAIRE AND BACK
| cutepuppy21 chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
I wish to hear more from this story
| Inumimi1 chapter 2 . 9/5/2011
So glad, after all this time, to see a new chapter! Great story telling - you create more mystery will every bit of information you reveal. Hope you continue to update!
| Samirah the Entertainer chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Please continue. I am intrigued by this story. Seems original.
| Xanathos chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Love the story,
Interesting concept u r developping...
Please keep up the good work...
i love Inu X miroku...
| ardy1 chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
You have Miroku speaking in a rather smug way, although not so much certain of himself as to not keep his eyes open to learning more. An excellent take. He comments on Inuyasha's apparent education, but lapses a bit in his own grammar (who/whom correct once but wrong the second time, for example), so you might want to either proofread again or get someone else whose grammar/spelling you trust to proof for you. Other than that, my only quibble is that Miroku sounds like a man in his late 20's-early 30's, given his financial success and tone of experience. If you mean to present him as younger, you should come up with a means to reveal facts that would support his gaining such success/experience while a mere teenager.
Looking forward to reading more...
| Inumimi1 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Wow, this story has me intrigued! There are so many elements to this story that I want to know more about, Is Inu's mother ill or just growing old, just what does Miroku want from our poor boy (wink wink) and it seems that Kouga wants to mate with Inu. I am looking forward to seeing where you will be taking this well written story!