|Reviews for Destiny is So Sweet|
| Alice745458 chapter 3 . 11/22/2010
oooh, this is so sad!1
| Alice745458 chapter 2 . 11/14/2010
i love this, i cant wqit for the next chapter
| Drusilla Maxima chapter 2 . 11/13/2010
A couple of tiny technical things - your dialogue tags aren't quite right (you tend to use periods when you need to use commas), and your past tenses are a little mixed up. It makes the story more difficult to read.
Other than that, I agree your dialogue is well done. I look forward to reading future chapters!
| MeetVirginia chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
the dialogue is nicely done
| HPnutters chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
I love stories from other character's POV. I'm glad you're writing one!
One suggestion, I would add a bit more detail about how and what she's thinking as she talks to Ginny (or anybody else). Right now you've just written what she's saying and I think that it would be beneficial to the story if you also talk about what's going on inside her head.