Reviews for Bedtime Story
ThreeThreads chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
I love this...

Absolutely no spelling or grammar errors. You have some pretty talented betas.

This story's so great and interesting. It would make a good background for Xehanort.

...Now I'm upset cause Square Enix and Disney will never read this and use it in Kingdom Hearts...
Magikbyrd chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
Riku and Xehanort family fics are cool.
Rani-Girl chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
This is somewhat cute. I have a similar idea that their relatives, though not grandfather/grandson. Just a little creepy to me, considering KH1. But this wasn't creepy! Favorites! :)
Razor Goto chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
Nice story, I love it! I wish to see more story's from this author!
Xeiden chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
Darkness is GENETIC. No seriously, the origins, the attitude (originally), hair and affinity with the darkness, when Kingdom Hearts give importance to the family would be more than sure that Riku and Xehanort are relatives.
XxX-SparklingEyes-XxX chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Wow, that was a shocker, but well-written. :)
MonMonCandie chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
...You have given me something to think about. I think my brain exploded. XD This is actually an interesting implication. I can really see this...how strange is that? Bravo on that end, but now another question comes to mind: why does Terra also resemble Xehanort's younger self?

...Yeah I'm pulling at nothing. LOL

Anyways, this was cute! I love how you wrote Riku! 3
dockingdisney chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Riku's thinking is really quite good for a four year old- not a bad thing!
Daughter-of-Light13 chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
I really really really REALLY liked your concept for this story. It's a very interesting idea, and it suits Riku's character very well. I really like his mom.

However, there were a lot of grammer and spell mistakes, and just weird sentance structures. Not a huge deal, but they were a little distracting.

I think it was good, but you could have done better. Rewrite? Sequel? Either would be fun. But, if you want to leave it, that's fine as well. It is, after all, your story.

Again, really good concept. You captured Riku's character well. I almost ragged on you for making him act older than most four year olds, and then I realized that, for Riku, that's probably extremely accurate. Good job. _
WonderHeroe chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
:o How can you NOT like Xehanort? He and Vanitas(not to mention Braig) are like... The most EVILLY awesome bad guys everrrrr! (which is why I'm making a fic starring him ;P)
Flightfoot chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
I thought that this was pretty good. I also noticed the similarities and came to the same conclusion that you did. Xehanort's the right age to be Riku's grandfather. It kind of reminds me of the situation in Harry Potter with Harry and Voldemort. Well, the part about there situations being very similar and there main difference being there choices, anyway.
Blu Rose chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Nice fic. I think you're the first person I've seen who wrote one of these fics. I always thought that if it was revealed that xehanort is related to Sora or Riku in some biological way, it'd be a major WTF moment. Keep up the good work.
alkenet chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Aw, you wrote Little Riku very well and I really liked your take on Younger Xehanort. It makes him seem more human rather than a power-hungry old man. Well done!