|Reviews for Forgotten Mistake|
| opaque-girl chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
I liked it.. The story was intresting but I wish there were more details and discriptions you know :) But it was intresting and I did enjoy Leto's character
| Ouch Charlie chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
i liked it, and i liked how Lucius thought about Narcissa's pregnancy!
very well written
| ToxicRainfall chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
Aww, it was so sad that Leto had to give up her baby, though Lucius was quite sweet and understanding. I liked it.
| xOff-with-the-nargelsx chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
really good but I was a little confused but I read it again and it makes sense nw! Great though well written x
| TayaCurragh chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
This is good :) It's a good way of overcoming the probelms, althought I feell sorry for Leto having to go through with it. Well done :)
| Indyanna chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
I just saw that you had posted this!
I really love what you did with the challenge. It's sad but wonderful!