Reviews for Alien King or Vampire: Two Human Girls
packrat17 chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
While watching Roswell, my sister and I noticed that Twilight was very similar! I really enjoyed reading this!

"Oh no you don't Edward Cullen. Don't get all angsty and morose on me now!

That was my favorite line! It amused me greatly!

Thanks for writing!

Packrat17 :D
AngelicDevil127 chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Yeah I had noticed so many similarities between the two stories when I first read twilight. It's funny that the same actress plays Maria and Bellas mom
lel2768 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Hello. This is gonna be a long review. So sit down. lol.

You need to know that I know nothing about Roswell. So cant really comment on those characters. If you got the characters right then I'm in shock about the similarities between them and the Cullens. Well done in spotting it. It makes the crossover work.

In your opening notes you said that this was set post BD but their initial meeting was very much before BD. May cause some confusion.

I think I could beta this and make it flow a little better. Only if you were comfortable with that though.

Altogether it was very good. I enjoyed it even though I didnt know all of the characters.

Should go read Roswell now but wont. Already obsessed with all things twilight and HP.

Thanks for showing me this.