Reviews for Nevermore
ZSEDC4 chapter 29 . 7/13/2011
I have to say, I really liked the story, the world in which it takes place and the raw, and yet refined, characterization done for each one you came up with. However, the actual writing style, syntax, and just plain spelling mistakes make me back off after only reading a chapter or two; when normally, I would read this in one sitting. To be totally honest, I want nothing more than to rewrite the entire thing using what's here as an outline.

But let me reiterate: the story is there. The writing is not.


Shadow of Silver Wolf chapter 7 . 7/11/2011


Topaz: Red and Yellow

Chase: Black and White

Viola: Bugsy

Rubin: Ruby and Sapphire

Plato: Pearl and Platina

Jade: Green and Silver [or is it emerald?)

Diamonda: Pearl and Platina
Guest chapter 4 . 5/19/2011
Yeesh...mean mom.
WyldClaw chapter 21 . 4/15/2011
oh wow! so all the kids are related to all the pokedex holders
WyldClaw chapter 8 . 2/28/2011
Sweet ! now topaz know why she can understand raiden!
WyldClaw chapter 7 . 2/28/2011
Whoa! that sure was brave of raiden to save topaz
WyldClaw chapter 4 . 2/28/2011
YIKES! if topaz's parents got that ticked about seeing chase on the news i can't even imagine what will happen when they find out about the injured pikachu in her room
Omega the Omniscient chapter 28 . 2/24/2011
Hahaha! NCIS reference. Clever. I didn't realize until you said Jethro.
Omega the Omniscient chapter 17 . 2/24/2011
Good to see Diamonda's humane, compassionate side. Was that sicko from Team Rocket? Guess ishiuld just keep reading.
Prince Hydron is a Twink chapter 29 . 2/22/2011
Prince Hydron is a Twink chapter 24 . 2/22/2011
i say scarlet is the trator!...Don't ask why
Prince Hydron is a Twink chapter 19 . 2/22/2011
I say there memoreis
Hero Of The Hazard chapter 29 . 2/20/2011
[Dear Topaz,

We're looking for you.

You can't hide from us in Mount Silver.

The Masked Man wants you back.

So do I.

I never loved Scarlet. It was just a front.

You're the one I want.

I'll be seeing you soon.

Love, Grey]

Hero Of The Hazard chapter 25 . 2/20/2011
[Then the building exploded.]

What the helk?


Hero Of The Hazard chapter 19 . 2/20/2011
[And why did Rubin get so mad when Karen's Umbreon attacked her?]

Maybe he doesn't like Umbreons? :D -Not helpful-

Not the Masked Man again! _
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