Glad to find a fic where they told the Mage's association to fuck off.

rin's great but it seems sacrifices must be made for best girl route, we will do what we must

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hey justdusty shut up also what Guest said to you is true

Shut up, I have seen you complain in other fanfic stories. All you do is prove that you are a whiny bitch that doesn't bother to think how a character can go through a development and you are too impatient to see it through.

I hate Shirou, i just really want him to die. If Archer is what Shirou became in the future then why the hell is he so fucking dumb?
There's a big difference between saving people and refusing to kill the vilest of men because you want to keep your conscience clean. I just want to find a fic where Shirou isn't mentally retarded. I respect characters with a purpose but this is just way too much. I like characters with ideals and a purpose, but when those are challenged during the plot there is supposed to be some fucking character growth goddamit! Also, he wants to save people, Sakura left on her own back to her place, why would he help her when there are people possibly getting mugged or raped across the street? shouldn't he save them instead?

Other than that, noice~

How is this rated T.

Great story mate.
10/10 would recommend to my friends

one of the two best fate fics i have ever seen

Perfection.

Better than the entire FGO storyline as well as all the fate movies put together.

I spend the entire night reading this. I am sooo sleepy.

Good job, you managed to write a fate fic that wasn't just shiro going "unlimited blade works goes slash slash" and also had him in a decent relationship with illya, who i greatly like as a character, so, overall, good job.

Epic Story! I loved the action scenes and Saber was awesome.