One of the greatest fate fanfictions ive ever read. It wad a pleasure that you kept me guessing towards the climax of the story up and into it taking place. Characterization was grand and developed well. Plot was actually interesting and appropriately felt with a sense of urgency. The events of the final chapters would have been terribly if attempted by a lesser writer. You pulled it off in a way thay very few can. Thats all i can describe without spoilers about those events. The humor was fantastic and actually had me bark out a laugh many times. You handled every sensitive side of the Fate universe with tact and gave ot the gravitas it deserved. Truly this work of art is an achievement. Finally, you pulled off one more grand hurdle that by and far ruins many stories; you pulled off not just a satisfying, but a truly enjoyable end.

Congratulations. As a fellow author and reader id like to say thank you. Thank you for writing this, putting in such astounding effort and time. Its something that wont be forgotten by many of us in these fandoms.

I hope life is good to you. Thank you again.

As much as I appreciate the fact that this fic gives Illyasviel a "route", I find myself somewhat disappointed. The romance felt weak; it's never the focus of the story and kind of just happens, sometimes even off-camera. It's not terrible, but it didn't get enough screen time, and Shirou should've discovered Illya's identity earlier.
The story itself is... questionable. It gives me the impression that the author constantly tried to one-up Heaven's Feel, which in itself was the worst route of Fate/Stay Night, and not just because Sakura is a terrible character. Later parts of the fic especially suffer from this, being full of confusing, obnoxiously long fights that were a slog to get through and unnecessarily "epic" events.
Overall, I give this story White Heaven's Feel out of 10. This is not a compliment, but I'm still glad it exists.

Me encantó tu historia, incluso si la encontré 5 años después de su final
Espero que te vaya realmente bien en tu vida y que sigas trabajando en tus proyectos y metas de la vida, Gracias por darme esta historia que sin duda se volvió parte de mi

If you're looking for innovation or progression outside of the original Nasu-verse story. Well... This is not the place to find it.

Because the...

Beginning OK. Nothing really changes.

Middle Still no real change in plot.

Ending Author what?

What a waste of time for someone to write 300,000 words and have someone read it.

It's fanfiction. Please write your own story instead of copy/pasting the source material with only a twist at the end people.

It's boring.

I’m not gonna mention that Excalibur technically could’ve done the same as ea. Its true power only comes out when the world is truly in danger.

Royally fuck caster and fuck Zouken even harder than ever before. I hate everything that's happening and will likely happen in the following chapters.

I've never thought that i wanted to see a fanfic about what would happen if Cu was Sakura's servant because of a torture scene

This has been a great story

was planning to drop it for the first few chapters thought shirou is a useless one in this fic but i stayed and am glad that i stayed.

This is Beautiful.

shirou buddy, every second your not running the fbi is getting closer to your location

A fantastic read. However I feel the final act really brought it down overall. Mordred could have worked as a catalyst for the realisation that Arturia needed to forgive herself for what happened to the kingdom. Enkidu sort of worked as he was Gils only friend. But Jeanne and Gil de Rais sort of just showed up for pretty much just fan service. Let’s not start on Shakespeare who was just comedy.

7.5/10
Would have been a nine but the last 7 or 8 chapters really spoiled it for me.

"He hadn't really earned it." And every fan felt like their chest was stabbed by a knife.

Don't worry, Shirou. Illya looks about thirteen and the age of consent in Japan is thirteen.
Though, I don't think that'd stop the FBI from knocking down your door.

Zouken was bluffing. If he were to interfere with a Master, the Association and Church alike would hunt him down and erase him and seize his knowledge from his workshop. The former out of a mix of anger at the rules being violated about not interfering with the war (and an opportunity to get someone's research), the latter at an opportunity to kill a very much evil magus.

Well, that or the writer forgot about the non-interference rule.