Reviews for Phoenix Rising
guest chapter 63 . 12/10/2016
Baby is okay so good ending here
guest chapter 62 . 12/10/2016
Should have killed them several chapters ago
guest chapter 55 . 12/9/2016
Aro is there so good job. Kill that trio he will know it is the right thing to do.
guest chapter 54 . 12/9/2016
I love how they are all getting along. Very good story
guest chapter 35 . 12/8/2016
Hope they dont kill Renee or Charlie
guest chapter 34 . 12/8/2016
Seth will imprint on the baby
guest chapter 16 . 12/6/2016
I love this chapter and the way you wrote these characters. You really are talented
marymary123
guest chapter 8 . 12/5/2016
Poor Charlie Renee is leaning on him now till she goes home to Phill,Charlie could get attached
Guest chapter 7 . 12/5/2016
I know you wrote this long ago. Just an FYI. you may already know about. A bobcat can not swing their tails they can twitch them but they are too short to swing. Much like a dog with a bobbed tail. :-)
guest chapter 4 . 12/5/2016
Great chapter
marymary123
mygooddog chapter 64 . 12/3/2014
I have read the first 2 books. I used to review almost every chapter,of the 80 or more story's I have read only about 3% of writers ever respond. I loved your stories will be reading the next one. Love your strong willed Bella, not so self hating Edward. Loving Rose, silly yet wise Emmett. Alice will be Alice, don't like your take on Jasper staying just for Alice. He felt the fear and pain of every human kill. That was one reason he drifted away from Peter and Charrilott . He can now feed without the added mental pain of the kill.
mygooddog chapter 4 . 11/26/2014
Did Carlisle bite her or did he inject Edwards venom?
lisamccool388 chapter 64 . 11/1/2014
i love this story
jdc0630 chapter 54 . 10/9/2014
My response to Edward staying at the cottage until the wedding would have been...

"YOU ALL KNOW I AM A NEWBORN & IT IS SAID WE ARE USUALLY 'VERY UNCONTROLLABLE'...PRONE TO VIOLENT OUTBURST...BAD TEMPERS...WELL, I'VE MANAGED TO SURPRISE EVERYONE WITH MY REMARKABLE CONTROL. BUT, I THINK YOU ALL BETTER HOLD ON TO YOUR HATS, & JASPER, YOU BETTER NOT TRY ANY OF YOUR MOJO ON ME.
I AM FIXING TO SHOW YOU A 'MAJOR NEWBORN FIT'...THANKS TO MY 'WAS FUTURE HUSBAND' & HIS BRIGHT IDEA & HIS CONTROLLING SISTER.

Then I would have walked into the house, got my keys, wallet & walked down got into my car & left...&
when Edward asked me if I'd be back I'd had to say, "Yes, but I don't know when."

I have ranted through this whole fucked up chapter...EDWARD IS AN ASSHOLE & IF IT WAS ME, PROBABLY NOT A MARRIED ONE EITHER.

If Bella doesn't tell off a bunch of people starting with Edward, Alice, warn Jasper & then anyone else this is going to be totally disappointing.

On to the next chapter...

Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
American Please chapter 51 . 8/28/2014
What is Boxing day?
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