Reviews for The Bloody Battle
adaydreamer95 chapter 7 . 3/2/2015
I really like this story, but sometimes its hard to tell who is thinking what and who is saying what maybe its just me who feels that way. But don't get me wrong I like the story and I love the story line
N.E.D.CL.1 chapter 12 . 2/10/2015
Please update soon, can't wait for the next chapter.
odst-survivor chapter 12 . 11/3/2014
Is it abandoned?
abigailrenea chapter 12 . 6/7/2014
Okay this story is absolutely wonderful. Like oh my god. Everything about it is perfect. But I'm really really sad that it hasn't been updated in like 2 years?! Ahhhh :(
Even if you have given up on it, I'm really happy that you started it! I loved it! Thank you!
No Just Dot chapter 5 . 2/1/2014
Good, but you should have been slightly more descriptive and drag it out longer. The smex scenes I mean. Though I have to had my pussy throbbing with want for a minute there chapter 12 . 2/1/2014
Love it ) It's been awhile but I hope you finish eventually!
MysticFireBlood chapter 12 . 7/12/2013
This was very rushed. I almost didn't want to finish it. Maybe you can go back and add more to it, take away the first person point-of-view, things like that. It has potential to be a really good story.
IBegToDreamAndDiffer chapter 3 . 4/6/2013
Ahaha, I LOVE the Janitor. Of course he can laugh when he wants!
QwillWillWrite chapter 2 . 1/12/2013
I'm loving the story story, stay awesome! If you do do Mpreg you could go for the basic C-section, a magic third trimester vagina, or (and I know this is strange, I've only read it once; a doujinshi manga) have him lay an egg... either "Daddy" or "Papa" can carry baby around in a something like a "Didymos Baby Carrier", and the egg can grow larger and larger slowly. ;D These are a few of the ideas I've read so far, the "c" being the most used.
Wannabe101 chapter 12 . 12/19/2012
Please update soon, this is brilliant! I can't wait to read more. :)
andysanime chapter 12 . 8/10/2012
Ok, so... really good job so far. Hope you update soon!
Skye Coulson chapter 12 . 6/27/2012
AWESOME as always! Please keep going!
Skye Coulson chapter 8 . 5/8/2012
PLEASE update this! This is sooooooooooooooooo good! I would really love to see where this could go!
Jack Johnathan Napier chapter 8 . 3/29/2012
This is a great story, i'm really getting into it, I hope you continue it soon. I like your little side notes that you share at the end of chapters too, some of them are very funny. Keep up the great work, dang JD and Perry would make a beautiful baby together :D he he
liv chapter 11 . 1/17/2012
Wow this story really has me hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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