|Reviews for The City|
| Uki96 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
I'm so depressed... how can you be that good with your first try at writting slash? I hate you...
No i'm kidding i just love you for you've done with this story!
That was so cute! And romantic!
I love the scene in the train and during the match!
And the lemon... it wasn't porn, it was art and love! This was a wonderful gift and i'm really glad you shared it with us!
You have such an amazing talent!
Keep writing Emmett slash story... you're too good at it to just stop like that! And we.. I need more Emmett gay stories (yes i'm selfish so what XD)
Thanks again for that story!
| JesseLuna chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
You are seriously good at slash, i really hope you do more so i can add those to my community also!
I LOVED this story! Everything was pretty perfect!
| brynn.brigham chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
This was so good! I loved your Paul and Emmett! So hot and sexy!
| Michonyx chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
You needn't have worried about screwing up; you did a spectacular job and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Keep 'em coming! :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Wow just Wow that was ... im lost for worlds.. It was HOT!
| NeedCoffeeINeedItOrI'llExpload chapter 1 . 12/27/2011
i found it sensual,sexy, and sweet!
| aStubbornRose chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
| LoveFool420 chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Oh my fucking god. Best one shot ever. EVER! This was seriously too hot. Wow. I can't believe this was your first attempt at slash. Needless to say I this was added to my favorites, I'm so happy I stumbled across it.
I feel it also held a special place in my heart 'cause I go to the Art Institue too! )
By the way, did I mention that this was fucking amazing and hot?
| bluelove02 chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
These two were so sweet together, I really enjoyed it.
| Adam-1D chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
| johnnycakewasgolden chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
I love how you incorporated Paul and Alex Meraz. Alex used to do MMA fights and I think he still does. The tattoos are hott as fuck. Please do more slash maybe a Paul Lahote/Embry Call!
| ReluctantOptimist chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Ahh! It seems that I am late with my review, but nevertheless this story deserves all the praise that it is entitled to. Let me first say this: I don't normally review often, and it is hardly in much detail, but credit must be given where credit it due. So, let's start from the beginning and work our way through it, okay? :)
I loved the use of the trains, and how realistic you made each character, more specifically, Emmett. Although the backstory for Emmett's enjoy of riding trains was short, I believe you really captured a "moment" where if it was too long then it would've been ruined.
Now Paul's character was great, and I was overjoyed when I saw that you made him a boxer (that was an idea I was thinking of doing). But not only that, he had the smarts to go along with his appearance...and a degree to prove it. :) Most people (myself included at times) only write Paul as being this overtly aggressive person - which he is shown as that type of person in the Twilight series, but I like how you took it beyond just anger and power, but stilled with the sexiness.
And then there is Jake and Edward...I don't particularly like this pairing, and was a bit skeptical when I read that they were together. Actually I was more so, displeased than skeptical. But I was happy when you didn't take their relationship too far. :D Jake and Edward aren't bad. I'll read them, and even write them, but they seem like the typical yaoi pairings so it's like, damn...where is the change in my life.
But the story overall was great. Your use of language and phrases were brilliant and humorous all at the same time. So I enjoyed it. :) Keep up the good work.
| GoTeamJemward chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
| GoinnGaGa chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Alright, so I know this was posted up a while ago, but I just recently found it, and seriously this was AMAZING! Like seriously, Im very picky with what I read and if I dont like something I wont read it let alone review! ahaha but you said this was your first attemp at slash? Wow. it was reallllllyyyy well written! And I love how you wrote Paul's character! ahaha i loved everyone else too but I love Paul ahaha well enough of my rambling! I loved this! great work! oxox GoinnGaGa
| slay1angel chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
really good story for a first time I think you wrote it was amazingly good :D