|Reviews for A Chastity Belt And The Horny virgin|
| BlackMagicRose7 chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
I loved this short story. I have had to have reread this 3 or 4 times.
| Momo1991 chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
i absolutly love this story
| UnknownMiko chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
funny stuff girl. but did you have to be so cruel to Sesshoumaru? more great stuff
| PunkRockBabyDoll20 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Hahahahhahahahahahahahahahaha! I'm ROFLing
| xxoikilluoxx chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
tht was embrassing for inuyasha when will get it not to try to prank sesshomaru
| DragonFire Princess chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Love the story. Hope you'll update the story...
| merlyn1382 chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
hes evil remind me not to get on his bad side
| CrescentMoon760 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
That was hilarious! i loved it! Stupid inuyasha!
| Quinn Villiers chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
I find that I cannot get into the story at all because of all the grammar and spelling mistakes. It is very difficult to enjoy it when there are a million things wrong with it. Also I think you try too hard to make the story funny that it does the opposite and kinda puts the reader off. If this is supposed to be a multi-chapter work, you should separate it as such instead of putting it all together because it gets confusing. Work on editing and proofreading your work before you post it. Give it more substance and eventually it will achieve the effect you want (which is to be satirical and funny). You ave potential to have some really great and humorous stories, only if you work on it and round some substance into your work.
| KatiechanXoxoXSesshoukun chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
I loved it girl, it was so hahahahaha funny hahaa
| pclark chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
I like it. I almost peed myself. (penny)
| Starcresentmoon chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
fuunny i loved it