Reviews for Shadow Clone Sex
naruto dies chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
needs more bass slut
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
stefan chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
it sucks. its to short. and not even good written. get some real sex loser. cause this was just traumeticly horrible.
girlftw3333 chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Good job! I liked it! :)
Takai153 chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Good lemon, but way too short. I love the idea of Naruto using the shadow clone jutsu to gangbang girls and you did a good job of portraying that, so I hope you'll write more just make them longer. Try being more descriptive about how it feels (for both Naruto and his clones and the girl), have him capable of cumming more often and do lots of different positions. With the Kyuubi's regeneration powers I imagine him being like the energizer bunny. If I can make a request, I'd like to see you do one with Naruto and Karui. I got a thing for fiery redheads and their just aren't enough lemons with Karui out there. And as long as I'm making a request, I also like Kurenai, Koyuki, Tayuya, Tsunade, Konan, Hinata, and anthropomorphic femKyuubi. I'm looking forward to your future lemons!
XxCaseyXx59 chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
Wow this is like the third fail story I have read this week for this pairing. I know this is a one shot sex thing but my god would it kill you to add some length maybe a little more detail instead spouting cheeseball lines from bad porn movies. If you cant write with some detail then for god sakes stop writing.
UMMX chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
nice story good job. It was an nice story. It was short to the point and normal naruto story.