Reviews for Masquerade
xXxBurplexXx chapter 14 . 3/20/2011
Yeah, you hit the depression part all right. I started crying when Alois found her! Even though it was coming! But I'm glad this isn't the ending, 'cause I wouldn't be happy if it was :P. I like the Alois angst ;).
Emsico chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Really great first chapter! I found it amazing how you made Remy's transition to the Trancy estate seem fluid and natural rather than overly-contrived. It's also great how you can write so much with so few words [I'd really like to be able to do that]. Can't wait to read the rest!
imginarygirl chapter 14 . 3/19/2011
Remy~! No~! I really like your story and i hope you update soon
SmartOotori chapter 14 . 3/18/2011
damn...that's depressing...O.o but great. You captured Alois's deparate form, he's was in character in the whole fic. Cant wait to read the next chapter
TheSecretSpot chapter 14 . 3/18/2011
Dude... That was wasnt depressing, that was delightfully morbid.

Im still cryinga little. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next. :)
Silly Pink chapter 14 . 3/17/2011
I loved this chapter- not that I like depressing things but I can appreciate a tragety. I think this story still needs a conclusion but I don't mind leaving Remy the way she is, and their relationship as it is. I kinda want Alois to go out with a bang and take everyone down with him in a move no one saw coming. And in death he hopes to meet those he loves once more- as they all suffer the same fate... Aha... Now I'm embarrassed :) .
Cherries and Bearbees chapter 14 . 3/17/2011
Hi there~

I really like Masquerade as story. I could actually see it fit pretty well in the anime up til now o.o;

I like Remy's character and persona she fits well along side Alois.

Please update soon~
Amplifyingly Loud chapter 14 . 3/17/2011
woahhh...first time i read a fic with a dead oc...you nailed it pretty well! i kept getting shivers down my spine.

great chapter!
kirika o7 chapter 14 . 3/16/2011
why is Remyyyy deaddddd? D8 nooooooo! don't leave Alois all aloneeeeee...please update soooon... I wish Ciel and Remy would get a get together somehowwww..sob sob...
amu-chan chapter 14 . 3/16/2011
awwww hurry up and please update! i LOVE this story. and want to know what happens next!
What'sMyName'sBusiness chapter 14 . 3/16/2011
Now I'm really, really confused. ;_;

And that's all I can really say.

Alois is just so desperate, it kills me. It makes me cry. And it's funny how he doesn't even realize his love for her, or he does and he's vividly denying it.

You nailed the depressing right on. With a bit of creepiness of him curling up to a dead body. I call it sweet here, but in real life, that would be really creepy. I'm wondering, does she come back? Or is she dead forever to be in Hannah's stomach along with Luka? (For some reason the makes me laugh. ;_; I've gone insane...!) I want Alois to have a happy ending. I don't want him to diiiie. I love him too much to watch him die over and over, again.

I hate Claude. Not even reacting to his master's pain. But it's Claude, so...I still hate him. He's Claude. I don't even like his name, 'Claude'. What a weird name. (lol sorry for this. I like to ramble on my hate of him a lot. ")

Hmm. Hannah, what could the other part of the contract be...? I'm curious. If there were any hints to it, I didn't catch them, soooo...yeah. Dying of curiosity here. Can't wait till the next update so I can find out~ That is, if we find out in the next chapter. If we don't...I could quite possibly kill you. ...Joking. ...Maybe.

But yes! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Whatzibit
memessa chapter 14 . 3/16/2011
W-WHAT? She dies like that? The heroine just dies? NOOOOOOOOO! TTTT I was actually crying... BUT WAIT! There's moar! I must see the rest! ;)
ShamelesslyUsed chapter 14 . 3/16/2011
*Slaps cheeks with wide eyes* Noooooooo Remy! D: A-and Alois... waaaah! That was really depressing _; Please update soon!
reira-sama chapter 14 . 3/16/2011
i finally made an account ! but for some reason i couldn't use my original pen name reira-chan! T~T so i chose reira-sama! :D anyway...REMY! T~T *sniff* she died! poor alois! i hope remy comes back to life or something! this chapter made me sad :'( but it was pretty awesome! update soon! :D 3
Hapi chapter 14 . 3/16/2011
Oh my! That was an interesting turn of events. I've always had the feeling that Remy was going to die and I've always had the assumption that it would be near the ending. What a surprise, though, to see that she has already left at this point of the story. I'm also quite intrigued as to what were the specific terms of the contract she and Hannah shared; I'm beginning to get suspicious based on what just happened.

I think the worst part is that Remy is Alois' first love. I mean, she has to be, right? Why else would he be that upset? Granted, their relationship was from from being sane, but it was there.

As I was reading this chapter, incidentally, I was also listening to The Slightly Chipped Full Moon from the soundtrack of Kuroshitsuji II. That was a huge mistake. Though I can feel the atmosphere, I'm usually unfazed whenever I read things that contain elements that would induce depression. But when I read this while hearing the sad melody play in the background, you can imagine just how upset I really was. I started remembering what Alois felt when he lost his brother. To experience that all over again, to relive the pain, to see another dear person disappear in the same way as the previous one did...

I didn't actually cry because I felt that this wasn't the end, but you really had me there.

Even though I hated his guts in the series, the lack of Claude seems to bother me a little. Perhaps...a bit more of him? Other than that, however, you're doing great and I can really see just how dedicated you are to this story. And nothing beats a passionate writer.

Kudos to another great chapter! _
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