Reviews for Working Man
ninny 1 chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
very nice i loved all of it thankyou
Storm Cascade chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
No fair... my mechanic is a middle aged balding guy with bad teeth... some people have all the luck ;) Great fic... nice stab of lust, passion and angst... and there's pizza! Perfect!
Mrsgee chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
I LOVED it! Sweet, hot, sexy and passionate. Their attraction was utterly convincing and I felt their highs and lows along with them. Just brilliant!
Kraftychik chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Loved it! Totally hot lemons!
AliMariexxx chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
This is just soooo amazing! I really have no other words... Angry Jake, when he commented about Bella slumming it, god, I actually had tears in my eyes, I felt his pain! So, SO good! x
cloudshadow22 chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Read this again today and realized that I had never written a review when I first read it, so here are my thanks for sharing another awesome story.
SagaDevotee chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
damn damn damn! that was soo good. the longing. the anticipation. i am SO in love with this Jake. Bella chose wisely. gah!
TheTabbyKitteh chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
This was great and I read ur note at the end Im the oppisite for everything of mine tends to be short and sweet. I cant ever seem to be able to write long stories.

BrookeBelikov chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
great one shot!
Authyme chapter 1 . 6/12/2011

FinnMac chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
"I have sisters."

I just thought that was a great line. He was trying to furtively get his next thought out. Cute.
Zapphe chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Good story, very nice flow. Love the Jacob perspective. Thank you for sharig.
SubtlePen chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
holy hell... *swoon*
La Push Starlight chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Oh, I love, love, LOVE this oneshot! Great work as always! I was all set to hate Bella to pieces but you made her final chat with Jacob remarkably real and illuminating and I found myself feeling sympathetic towards her. Your Jacob was awesome (as always!) and the interaction between Bella, Jacob and Edward was perfect.

Favourite brilliant lines:

Was I planning to storm the house and challenge Cullen to a duel? Pistols at dawn? Who was I kidding?



"I hope you want it rough, baby," I snarled, my face a millimeter from hers, "because that's what you're getting this time. Whatever happens after tonight, I'm gonna make damn sure You. Don't. Forget. Me."

OMFG! *dies*
Vane3131 chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
This was a great story
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