Reviews for Harry Potter and the Rejected Path
Alwin-nl chapter 33 . 4/5
Apparently this was never finished. Too bad even when it was a bit rambling and random the last few chapters.
Alwin-nl chapter 7 . 4/1
Wow, major downer man. Why kill the poor girl?
vswey chapter 3 . 3/25
so much of this chapter was silly or melodramatic or something. I'm not sure of the right word. I feel like you were going for harrowing. It was not that.
Freddie Rindklip chapter 5 . 3/20
Regarding McGonagall's age you could also state that wizards live longer than non-magicals giving them a more youthful appearance.
Jimbocous chapter 33 . 3/12
Thanks for a really great read so far. Can't wait to see what you may have in mind for Dumbles' "discovery" of Harry's backstory. Would love to see more of this.
Sure hope you find your way back to it at some point, if real life permits!
wsbenge chapter 33 . 2/29
I read the story straight through. It appears the sex was tied to auras and a kind of magical networking. Took a long time to form the networked coven. It is done. Albus and Minerva are the next big obstacle ... then what to do with magicals and what your shatter point is.
wsbenge chapter 13 . 2/27
The Punisher. Judge, Jury, and Executioner.

That happens when law is lacking.
Mari Wollsch chapter 33 . 2/22
lovely great, please finish/continua this story xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Tenderroast chapter 8 . 2/4
After reading chapter 8, Dumbles deserves a fate worse than death.
Xoxo chapter 6 . 1/11
Sexually manipulating narcissa? Yuck. This could’ve been a good story but the it ain’t it. This was obviously written by a man.. or rather fourteen year old boy with all the talk of sex. Harry sees the women around him, even the ones he doesn’t like as just sex objects
hanower chapter 7 . 12/24/2023
this book, every chapter is all about sex. If you are looking for cheap 2nd rate wank material go ahead. If you are looking for an actual book to read, look elsewhere.
habba chapter 3 . 12/24/2023
a whole chapter dedicated to talk about sexuality, and simply make the readers angry about the world surrounding harry. a whole chapter of piss and trash
abuduu chapter 2 . 12/24/2023
his major problem is that he is horny? welp, this went downhill faster than i thought
blood enraged chapter 10 . 12/14/2023
had to stop here. hopefully constructive criticism time: your writing style. you write alot, but you often write about nothing important, you drone on about a pointless topic or musing and the topic, dialog, or conversation is lost. you need to be a bit more concise and to the point, on a scale of one to ten, your current being a 10, scale it back to a 6
NovaKush chapter 18 . 12/1/2023
I know this is an old story but my God that Jamaican accent is bullshit I'm Jamaican and my guy that is a stereotype that is perpetuated in movies and the areas where The majority of the tourist visit no one in Jamaica speaks like that

the best way to describe that accent is you having a sniper and missing the broad side of a barn way the fuck off
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