|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Rejected Path|
| CarolWim chapter 1 . 11/22
I read some of the comments here and they are extremely positive or negative, not much in the between.
My two cents I give here. The fic is great. The porn scenes are great, but too much after a while. They get boring and predictable.
But the storyline is great. Thanks for writing. And the (almost) end is original and unexpected.
| Sanders7201 chapter 33 . 11/22
please update tgis amazimg story.
| Hippothestrowl chapter 6 . 11/12
Skipped the history lesson and abandoned the boring schoolboy porn. Not so sure whether to bother if the strong passages are so swamped by the weak. It's like clutching for a few particular straws in a very loose haystack.
| Hippothestrowl chapter 5 . 11/12
Drawn out, but a decent drama.
| Hippothestrowl chapter 4 . 11/12
Very slow, but at least progress.
| Hippothestrowl chapter 3 . 11/12
| Hippothestrowl chapter 2 . 11/12
Skipped all this immature indulgence...
| Hippothestrowl chapter 1 . 11/12
Well this was a damned good bash to begin with but then Harry just crumples as usual, lets himself be locked up, and decided he will kneel down and kiss Dumbledore's arse after all by fulfilling the incredibly stupid and impotent prophecy. Shame. All his grief he has brought upon himself in every year at Hogwarts. There are a dozen ways he could just walk away if he had a brain.
| TurtleMilker chapter 6 . 10/23
I've decided to stop reading this after concluding that it is just badly written and exceptionally depraved porn. It is not only pretentious and full of tropes but it is filthy and vulgur. You're a disgusting person for writing this, please keep your child rape fantasies to yourself and stop polluting the internet with your filth. There is nothing wrong with smut written in good taste, however there is nothing tasteful about this pile of shite.
| John Ciaccio chapter 33 . 10/18
Great plot and character development. Very fun read.
| Guest chapter 27 . 10/11
I seem to remember that Ginny blacked out for the duration of being possessed. She said she’d wake up in strange places or covered in feathers and blood. Horrifying but not as bad as actually remembering trying to murder people or killing chickens. Assuming there was no “residue” left behind I always just assumed she recovered ok in the 2-3 years between CoS and OotP when she actually has something to do in the plot.
| Prometheus-777 chapter 7 . 10/12
Heh, the Lilith Moon scenes were interesting. I feel like it's setting up something significant. And it's funny how Tonks is at breaking point just like any female near Harry lol.
Lol! Making Narcissa in the "SHRIEKING SHACK" because she's a "screamer" during sex is quite hilarious lol.
Ah, so this is Lilith's Fate as Harry's Mistress huh...
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/5
Did you call C.S. Lewis an American just to make people angry?
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/5
(FF won’t let me log in, sorry I’m though) I’m pretty sure Harry was about to start or was in 4th year when he learned what an Auror was, which is even worse, really. I think he only learned in relation to someone mentioning that Moody was one. However, his dad wasn’t an Auror afaik. Rowling was asked at some point and she said he was basically a trust fund kid who was concentrated on the war instead of needing to get a “paying job”. This was while the books were still coming out I think and I haven’t seen anything official to contradict it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/5
Ffnet won’t let me log in for some reason (completing the captcha takes me to a blank page for some reason) but:
Random note, up until I read your AN and looked it up, I thought Andromeda was the oldest daughter.