Shades of The Mona Lisa! Jack Harper is apparently one of the demons of ONI...

Yeahhh, I could well imagine the Flood not particularly liking the Cycle.

Ahh, Udina, greatest ally the Reapers ever had.

Love your stuff :)

I have given this 40 chapters to improve to a even just decent level and it hasn’t. This is peak early 2010s im a edgy 14 year old and im going to have torture scenes and plot armor for the most annoying villains. You didn’t even craft halfway decent ones either its just “hurdur we invade because reasons” plus you have the audacity to mock those that hurt your little feelings. And pointlessly scale down the UNSC and RSN because you want it to be “fair” I hope sukron shoves his scorcher down YOUR throat. Love - a disappointed reader

ok biotics may be good but they are nowhere close to Spartans

You really need to brush up your Mass Effect knowledge. Turian Councilor Valern?

Based Tron Legacy enjoyer. I second your recommendation to watch it. I often listen to the soundtrack because it's just so good. Good chapter. Yeah, sadly some "feminists" take it to the point they become misandrists.

БВХВХАХАХХААХ БАЛЯЯ, no bro, its totally wrong translation. russian analouge for "fuck you" would be "идите нахуйidite nahui].

This just makes me curious how deadly Spartans are if The Flood are more wary of them than an Asari Justicar (idk how strong Aria is. But knowing she rules all of Omega and Justicar being top of the top for Asari, I can confidently say she's comparable to one)

But I digress that they're talking about John-117, not just any other Spartan. Even amongst the already hyper-lethal Spartan-II, John is one of a kind.

I think if you want UNSC to field railguns for normal infantry, you have to show human soldiers STEAMROLL the Turian infantry. Because railguns with normal bullet caliber are absolutely devastating.

You are definitely spot on with Ceberus, people who like them seem to only remember them from Mass Effect 2, haven't read any of the novels and seem to forget all the bad things they did in Mass Effect 1. Which is also why I find their dislike of TIM going even more evil in Mass Effect 3 baffling, he's always been like that, he just wanted to show his nice side.

Well I hate to break it to you but the only use of nukes ever was against targets that had lots of civilians, sure it was also against their factories and ports but it was mostly used for one thing, to demoralise Japan, to see them destroying two cites with two planes, the fear that they might destroy more is waht caused Japan to surrender. It's the main use for strategic nuclear weapons, to wipe out enemy cities and Shiva nukes are definitely strategic nukes. Now its not the most effective means of war as most of the time it just hardens the resolve of the enemy civilians so it usually always better to cripple their industrial and agricultural basis, yes this indirectly kills civilians however it creates fewer martyrs to rally behind.

Is it 100 000 years exactly that the Forerunner bunker has been there because that would put it on the cycle before the Prothians. Unless yiu drastically changed the Reapers I don't see them being compatible with the Flood as the Realers still want some life left over whereas the Flood want all life to become Flood. You are a rather good writer, you create interesting, layered characters and your story has good pacing, especially the action scenes as there are many Mass Effect fan fiction writers who spend three to five chapters on one battle and it can get tedious. I look forward to reading your other works once I'm finished with this one.

Faction balancing? Instant turn off.

Just another dog shit ME fic.