Reviews for Rini's teenage life
Marius chapter 4 . 6/26/2016
5. Chapter 5
Guest chapter 4 . 2/17/2016
5. Chapter 5
Carnys Darkeyes chapter 3 . 10/19/2010
I love the story so far!

Please write more!

Also, could you make the chapters longer, and start a new line when a new person speaks?
Serandi82 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Hey! Firstly, welcome to the realm! Always glad to see a new writer...

I do have to say I like this idea. Your formatting could use a little work, though. The way it looks now, it's difficult to read.

Good story concept, and I can't wait to see what you do with it.

Let me know if you want formatting help.