|Reviews for Rini's teenage life|
| Carnys Darkeyes chapter 3 . 10/19/2010
I love the story so far!
Please write more!
Also, could you make the chapters longer, and start a new line when a new person speaks?
| Serandi82 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Hey! Firstly, welcome to the realm! Always glad to see a new writer...
I do have to say I like this idea. Your formatting could use a little work, though. The way it looks now, it's difficult to read.
Good story concept, and I can't wait to see what you do with it.
Let me know if you want formatting help.
GLAD TO HAVE YOU!