Reviews for The hot Doc
heredia chapter 2 . 10/18/2014
since when Sephiroth is whore of Zack?he wouldnt go into such filth and humilation
mangalover234 chapter 2 . 10/24/2013
That was solo hot. I absolutely loved it! ;)
Amiinyan chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
while normally I'm not a fan of this threesome, I'm glad I decided to branch out. I like the fic a lot.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/25/2013
everything was hot except the parts involving urine. That was kinda gross. You do have a lot of talent as a writer, but why would you do that to poor Cloud? Eww
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
when i saw the title, I thought it said "hotdog" and was some kind of euphemism; ha-ha-ha
To shut up bitch chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
You no like gay sex stories then no read gay sex story. If you know you hate gay stories then why the fuuuuuuuck did you read this? Look. Don't you know what's fanfiction for? For fans to let out their imaaaaagination. So if you like straight pairings then shoo! The story you were reading is for people who likes gay smexiness idiot! DON'T LET PEOPLE'S EFFORT TO WASTE MAN! Screw you said the plot is good when you don't like a thing this author was typing so you know what? Shut Up Bitch you have to Shut The Fuck Up...
UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 2 . 1/25/2013
O.O! dude you have one very interesting mind to come up with this
xSonya chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
oh wow thats so hot! Nice writing!
shut up bitch chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
like my name says. shut the fuck up. please stop writing about gay sex. it makes me feel fucking sick. holy fucking shit. i mean you are a great writer dont get me wrong on that, but if you write about sex,make it guy fucking girl or girl fucking a guy,not lesbian sex or gay sex
Purple Pallbearer chapter 2 . 5/27/2011
Omg these were some of the hottest thing I've read in a while. Great job loved them.
flame-of-strife-08 chapter 2 . 5/4/2011
i loved it~! i liked the first chapter more tho, Urine is a turn off for me, being an older sibling i spent to many years cleaning up piss for me to find it the least bit arousing. but other than that it was wonderful!

some one forged your story chapter 1 . 4/5/2011

this dude stole your storie while some parts are different alot of them are the same im reporting him/her because i dont like people who take whats not theirs. I would suggust that you and all your readers to report this person.

P.S love your work i dont review alot
Wolfess-Sanu chapter 2 . 2/3/2011
I very much enjoyed your kinky story, ZacksmexyFair! 3 Currently, my owners haven't Collared me, but ****-sama wanted to try a urine enema sometime. I've already had a normal enema, so I know what to expect discomfort wise. Reading your story made me hot, now I have to ask Sir or Miss for permission to play. :p

Good work!
Haru Inuzuka chapter 2 . 1/29/2011
... O/O ...lets just say...I had the same problem after reading both... I sorta blinked at the whole 'urinating' part, but meh. Tis still cute. And I learned a new work: Twink! Thanks~
xxxRoxenxxx chapter 2 . 1/25/2011
Flamin' eck, talk about HOT!

Had to kinda...blink rapidly at the urine bit, but you know what? Don't 'ack it till ya try it I guess lol (Not that I EVER would, nu-uh. Never. Ever ever ever)

Written exceptionally well aaand hope to hear more from you soon D

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